Rehne Do

Daanie · January 9, 2006, 2:43pm

Mujh ko apne hazoor rehne do
Kuch mera bhi gharoor rehne do

Raaston ka khumaar kaafi hai
Manzilon ka saroor rehne do

Har khataa ki sazaa nahin laazim
Kuch mera bhi kasoor rehne do

jaan_f · January 9, 2006, 6:23pm

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kitna khoobsurat likha...............koooooooooooool

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · January 10, 2006, 11:06am

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Nice :-)

Precious_Khan · January 13, 2006, 10:16am

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buhat achchay …

muslima_1 · January 16, 2006, 10:40pm

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loved ur poem reminds me of this.p.s sum1 plz tell me if its very bad
teri chahato ke samundar ne
mere armano ko zindagi di

dil tu tha ab toot chuka
is dil ku khushi di

hone lagi thi mohabbat ab tu mot se
us ne pyaar ki hade tor kar mujhko aashiqi di

ASA · January 17, 2006, 3:58am

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bouhat khoob… :k:

Daanie · January 31, 2006, 2:23pm

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wonderful

muslima_1 · February 6, 2006, 6:49pm

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thanks

nia_khan · February 7, 2006, 4:57pm

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sweet and simple :~)

ghazel_rizvi · February 8, 2006, 10:07am

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acha likha app nay dani