rawayat toor dii us ne .........

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 6, 2011, 7:22pm

wo aksar mujh se kehtii thii wafa hai zaat aurat kii mgR jo mard hotayy hein boht bey-durd hotayy hein kisii bhanwarayy kii soorat gul ki khushbo` loot jatayy hein

Suno!
tum ko Qasm merii
rawayat toor dena tum
na tanha chor k jana
na ye dil toor k jana

mgR phir yun howa ~Mohsin~
mujhe anjaaN rastayy per
akela chor ker us ne
mera dil toor ker us ne

mohabbat choor dii us ne

wafa haii zaat aurat ki,
rawayat toor dii us ne.. !!

Amal · February 6, 2011, 7:25pm

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Bohat zabardast bayaan hey…bilkul seedhi, saadhi si nazm hey lekin ghazab ka bayaan hey… …

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 6, 2011, 7:27pm

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aur clapping kerien :p

IS · February 6, 2011, 7:28pm

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very nice :-)

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 6, 2011, 7:35pm

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thanks IS

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · February 6, 2011, 7:41pm

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Aesi rawaayat Mard hazraat ziyaada kartay haiN

Nice Poem :-d

Faixan · February 6, 2011, 7:42pm

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bohat khoob

blueangel · February 6, 2011, 7:43pm

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that was nice :)

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 6, 2011, 7:45pm

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Gul .... baat tu sach haii mgr baat hai ruswaii ki =D

thanks for likinf blueangel and faixan :)

Amal · February 6, 2011, 8:15pm

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Us ke extra charges hoN ge :D

waleedhbk · February 7, 2011, 10:34am

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I posted this one too some weeks ago :D

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 7, 2011, 1:47pm

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extra charges... hmm.. 0k i will post s0me m0re poetry :p

waleedhbk i came here alm0st 10 days back...so i had n0 idea if sm1 hs posted it 0r nt :)

ehsan · February 7, 2011, 3:55pm

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Wah, buhat khoob.

waleedhbk · February 7, 2011, 3:57pm

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Kuch Nhe hota meine to bus btaya tha

BTW its my fav one :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 7, 2011, 6:00pm

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a btaya? mae ne tu ni pocha !! j/k

thanks f0r liking it

thanks to u too ehsan bhai

Daanie · February 8, 2011, 8:52am

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wonderful :)

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 8, 2011, 9:57am

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:) thankx

pktun · February 8, 2011, 10:43am

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Awsome

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 8, 2011, 12:53pm

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thanks pktun ... nice image :)