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Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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people help me in rating this poem..or just tell how it is and what does it make you feel or remind you of..kewl? :slight_smile:

hum mer bhee jayin to yaad na kerna humko..
humne to tumhin jaan se berh ker chaha..
tumhaaree yaadon min din raat guzaarey humne..
tumhaaree saanson ko seeney min basana chaha..
humin ilzaam naa do hum bhee unko chahney lagey..
jin ankhon min chaand sitaaron ne uterna chaha..
kesey guzertee zindagee mohabeet ke bina..
her sachey dil ne hay yahan asmaan ko choona chaha..
tumhaaree ankhon kee benaam sergoshiyaan nahi bhoolin ge..
aaj tek kis ne yahan apni mohabbet ko khona chaha..
mer bhee jayin to yaad na kerna humko..

i know this very romantic type of poem..but let me know wat u guys think..and those who r curious who wrote it..PM me… :smiley:

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i just want to say i steal it from somewhere..actually from someone on GS.. :devil:

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chor chor ..chor chor…
:hula:

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shaib bhai..any thoughts?..

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bola naa.. bhai.. *** :k:

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BHai?..magar min to app se chota hon?.. :konfused:

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wow, bohat achi hai :k::k:

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oh yar.. *** mean.. 3 stars yar.. 3 star means Acha hai.. theek hai.. chalay ga. lakin doray gaa nahin :smiley:

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there is a lot more of it..i did’nt post cuz its quite long.. :rolleyes:

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and for ur kind info.. u r 2 years older den me.. :nook:

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shaib bhai..min pehli baar min samajh giya tha.. :wink:

appko maaloom nai magar apna intelligence kafi high hay.. :snooty:

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huh?

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bhai nahin bolnay kaa… intelligent boy :mocking:

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i don’t know aap do saal berey kesey go gaye… kuch din pehley to 3 saal chotey they..:konfused: