Raqss kartay khayal teray

Azad · December 18, 2003, 5:49am

Hum say mat pooch, khushbu say judaii kay azaab
Chain gaii teray honton ki nammi, murjha gay hain gulab
…
…
Her shaam chalay atay hain gosha e tanhaii main
Raqss kartay khayal teray, Meray ttott’tay bantay khwab.

(Adab Arz)

AQ · December 18, 2003, 7:30am

humm :)

chodhry · December 18, 2003, 8:16am

hmmm

anwaar bhai

Shab-e-Hijar · December 19, 2003, 11:28pm

Nice :k:

Koyal · December 20, 2003, 2:40am

hmmmmmmmmmmm

pS: Beautiful..:p

Dilsay · December 20, 2003, 4:50am

Re: Raqss kartay khayal teray

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *
Hum say mat pooch, khushbu say judaii kay azaab
Chain gaii teray honton ki nammi, murjha gay hain gulab
.........
.....
Her shaam chalay atay hain gosha e tanhaii main
Raqss kartay khayal teray, Meray ttott'tay bantay khwab.

(Adab Arz)
[/QUOTE]

Azad jee... Khuda aap ko khush rakhay

Azad · December 22, 2003, 5:33am

Shab-e-Hijar ** Shukria **

Koyal ** Zara nawazi hay aap ki **

Dilsay ** Nawazish ... Jee Allah hi hay **

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 22, 2003, 5:35am

gr8.....

Azad · December 22, 2003, 6:25am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *
gr8.....
[/QUOTE]

kia great???

Koyal · December 22, 2003, 1:07pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *

Koyal ** Zara nawazi hay aap ki **

[/QUOTE]

adab baja lati hai**.....:)

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 22, 2003, 11:18pm

apka sar:aaha:

cuteepie · December 23, 2003, 1:45am

:k:

Azad · December 23, 2003, 7:16am

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*Originally posted by Koyal: *

adab baja lati hai**.....:)
[/QUOTE]

Lay aain jee ... daikh laytay hain aap kay adaab bhi .. :)

Azad · December 23, 2003, 7:18am

Jee pata hay khali hay

Aabi · December 23, 2003, 11:02am

azad bhai
khwab toot kar nahin bante ban ker toot’tay hein

Azad · December 23, 2003, 11:20am

Baitta Jee pata hay … ghar nahi pata to aap ko ke Yeh Azad khwab hain … kisi grammar teacher kay nahi .. aynak laga ke

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 24, 2003, 12:08am

:biggthumb