raqs karane kaa milaa hukam jo dariyaa'ooN meiN

NikamiJano · January 31, 2003, 3:07am

raqs karneY kaa milaa hukam jo dariyaa’ooN meiN
ham ne khush hoke bhaNvaR baaNdh liye paa’oN meiN

un ko bhi hai kisii bheege hue manzaR kii talaash
buuNd tak bo na sake jo kabhi sahraa’ooNn meiN

ai mere ham-safaroN tum bhii thaake-haare ho
dhuup kii tum to milaavaT na karo chaa’ooN meiN

jo bhii aataa hai bataataa hai nayaa ko_ii ilaaj
baT na jaaye teraa bemaaR masiha’ooN meiN

chand_chehra · January 31, 2003, 3:49am

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very nice jano gi :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 31, 2003, 4:30am

veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy niceeee :k::k::k:

Azam_1 · January 31, 2003, 12:11pm

Re: raqs karane kaa milaa hukam jo dariyaa’ooN meiN

tum sab ki choro or sirf mere bataye howey ilaaj par amal karo

insha ALlah jald hi afaqa hoga →

btw, very hi nice one nikami ji :k: :k:

Lamhay · January 31, 2003, 12:14pm

Nikami nice to c u and ur poetry sweetoooooooo!!!

really gr8 one!

Capricorn · January 31, 2003, 12:19pm

Re: raqs karane kaa milaa hukam jo dariyaa’ooN meiN

Zabardast :k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · January 31, 2003, 12:32pm

Re: raqs karane kaa milaa hukam jo dariyaa'ooN meiN

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

un ko bhi hai kisii bheege hue manzaR kii talaash
buuNd tak bo na sake jo kabhi sahraa'ooNn meiN

ai mere ham-safaroN tum bhii thaake-haare ho
dhuup kii tum to milaavaT na karo chaa'ooN meiN

[/QUOTE]

Very Nice NJ:)

Amal · January 31, 2003, 7:13pm

Re: raqs karane kaa milaa hukam jo dariyaa’ooN meiN

bohat khoob NikamiJi…hamesha ki tarhaN:):k:

Pyara_sa_doost · January 31, 2003, 7:16pm

nice one thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

nikii · January 31, 2003, 9:27pm

wowww zaberdasttttt :k:

WiseGuy · January 31, 2003, 11:02pm

Re: raqs karane kaa milaa hukam jo dariyaa’ooN meiN

Bohat khoob Jano Jee, :k:

_Passionate · January 31, 2003, 11:46pm

bohat khoob nikami…:k:

_Nazish · February 1, 2003, 2:50am

Beautiful :k:

bohat khoob.
is it your own?

BanJaraa · February 1, 2003, 3:21am

Nakamiiiii jiii bohat khoob.... keep it up....

hum yoon hi aap ke zoak ki daaad dete rahain
aap yoon hi dil-e-natwaaaaan ko behlate rehna

:) ;)

NikamiJano · February 1, 2003, 5:12pm

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thanks chando g..

NikamiJano · February 1, 2003, 5:19pm

thanks..Nazish..Passion,nikii sis..payara...Gul-e-tea..GKK

NikamiJano · February 1, 2003, 5:20pm

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thanks Wg..

NikamiJano · February 1, 2003, 5:21pm

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thanks Amal and welcome back hamesha ki tarhaN:flower1:
how was ur vacation btw

NikamiJano · February 1, 2003, 5:22pm

same here nice to see u .. keep smilling

NikamiJano · February 1, 2003, 5:24pm

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ewwwwwww phir a gaye poetry forum main cig k sath :yukh: :yukh:

ab agar asiay aiey na tu .phirrrrrrrrr…