Ranjish

I know it is an old one but still my favourite:

Ranjish hee sahi, dil hee dukhanay kay liye aa
aa phir say mujhey chor kay janay kay liye aa.

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nice shair, sab theek thaak hai na ?

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wah wah !!

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:) nice sher ehsan g but kis ko bula rahya ap ...may i help you? :p

and also welcome here:)

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^ Kahan tuk suno gee kahan tuk sunaon
Hazaron hee shikway
mein kya kya bataon. :)

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wohi taak sunain gain
jahaN taak ap sunaiey
sirf ik ghanta hia pass meray
jo kuch sunana hai jaldi se sunaiey :blush:

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wah wah kiya zouQ paya hai :k:

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beautiful sher:)

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Jo ja rahay ho toh meri khabar bhi ley aana
mein aapnay aap ko khud ghar mein chor aaya hoon

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^ aap ko pehchaney ge kaesey :p

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kya baat hai Ehsaan jee zabardast sher,

aik baar aur aap daad ke mustahaq

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Yehi to karney ke leeye aaey heiN aap :frowning: Kheir…thanx for coming over here :):flower1:

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^ Amal: woh wada hee kiya joh wafa ho gaya.

Zindagi mein kissi say mohabbat na kar
jo hai woh bewafa phir shikayat na kar

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^ umeed se ho jatee , taskeen se mil jaate ,

wafa na kia hota . Wada to kia hota

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:)

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dau chaar hee saheeh, kuch tau sunaanaY kaY liye aa
aa phir saY kissi ko MOD banaanaY kaY liye aa

uss kee “chuTkee” saY maiN dard saY chekhaa kiyaa “aaaa”
daaRh ko pakRaY huaY woh kehtaa phiraa “aa” “aa”

(AQ: sorry for the bad attempt :smooth: )

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^ :hehe: ap k chance phir b kam haiN :smiley:

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^
I know Unique baaji.. :)
I do not do shaairy to get reward... heck i dun even post my poetry in these forums anymore :~)

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how sad jus only for that reason ch ch ch shaa’erooN k dil tu bohat ..kheR sano ki:halo:

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it is sad to know you only see one reason and that too which I did not mention... Judgemental.. are we??

Perhaps you only take things out of context and perhaps you only read half and ignore half....

kher, it depends on who is perceiving what.. really.. :)
I have my own reasons and perhaps Amal had his own reasons when he had left this place a while back...

and perhaps, Amal knows my point of view and perhaps you have read it too..l it is just that you only read what you like... :)