rahii us k jaal mae kaat-tii, mere gird bun gaya jaal sa !!

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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*wo mohabbato`N ka jahaN liya mere saamne tha misaal sa mgr ab ki rutt mien ye kia howa wo jahaN hai roba-zawaal sa

na umang haii na tarang haii, na wo rung chehre ka laal sa
na khushii hoee kissi baat se na hii ranjj sa na malaal sa

kissi aur haath mien daurr haii, kissi aur haath ka haii honer
jo lagay hien zahirii aankh se hamien, patliyoN ka kamaal sa

wo maQaam aaya hayaat mien wo sulajh gaya mae ulajh gayee
rahii us k jaal mae kaat-tii mere gird bann gaya jaal sa

wo jo khushboN mien basa gaye, jo rung-o-noor saja gaye yunhii aa gaya mujhe abhii un hii mosumoN ka khiyaal sa

wohii sard-mehrii mizaaj mien, wohii be-mehR se nigah bhee
yehii us k tourr ajeeb thay wohii mera bun gaya haal sa *

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Re: rahii us k jaal mae kaat-tii, mere gird bun gaya jaal sa !!

Bohat khoob HeArT HaCKeR…:k:

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Re: rahii us k jaal mae kaat-tii, mere gird bun gaya jaal sa !!

thanks AryaaN :)

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Re: rahii us k jaal mae kaat-tii, mere gird bun gaya jaal sa !!

Bohat khoob HHUUU :)

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Re: rahii us k jaal mae kaat-tii, mere gird bun gaya jaal sa !!

very nice HH i must say aap ka taste bohat acha hai

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Re: rahii us k jaal mae kaat-tii, mere gird bun gaya jaal sa !!

thanks Wisuu and taara :)

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Re: rahii us k jaal mae kaat-tii, mere gird bun gaya jaal sa !!

very nice.

Bolnay Waley cheezain...... (merged)
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Re: rahii us k jaal mae kaat-tii, mere gird bun gaya jaal sa !!

:k: :slight_smile:

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Re: rahii us k jaal mae kaat-tii, mere gird bun gaya jaal sa !!

so sweet HH :) Very nice one

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Re: rahii us k jaal mae kaat-tii, mere gird bun gaya jaal sa !!

:k:

:slight_smile:

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Re: rahii us k jaal mae kaat-tii, mere gird bun gaya jaal sa !!

thanks ghazalu, koyal, hina and menu :)