AQ
February 20, 2006, 2:36am
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One of my old poems . Some of you who have access to my private journal entries might have read it there…
Sharing it after the goodwill gesture from our new moderator Amal…
Farhat Abbas Shah kay in dau asha’r kee zameen maiN likhi gaYee hai:
*Laakh doori ho magar Ehd nibhaataY rehna
Jub bhee Baarish ho mera soug manaatay rehna
Tum gaYe ho tau sar-e-shaam ye aadat Thehri
Bus kinaaray pay khaRay haath hilaatay rehna
*
Sar-e-Shaam, nazraiN falak pe jamaateY rehnaa
TooT-tey taaroN saY qismat ko bachaateY rehnaa
Chaand maiN dekhtaa hooN jub bhee maiN soorat uss kee
Saath muskaan kay ik daagh chehraY pe sajaateY rehnaa
Yaad uss ko woh ehd-e-wafaa ho kaY naa ho
Mujh ko hai Charaagh umeed kaY jalaateY rehnaa
JaanaY waalaY ko kabhi aana tau naheeN hai laikin
Sar-e-Raah palkoN ko, hur dumm bichaateY rehnaa
Yaad jo kabhi aataY haiN lamhaY woh Maah-e-December kaY
Dil maiN buss phir Soch kay deep jalaateY rehnaa
Woh uss kee bay Wafaayee, Woh bay Rukhi, woh Sard Mehri
Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm’aiN bujhaateY rehnaa
Hai sharamsaar Ishq, Mohabbat Sar nigooN hai laikin
QissaY mohabbat kaY Anwaar phir bhee sunaateY rehnaa
12:29 AM 7/26/2005
Samad
February 20, 2006, 2:41am
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Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa
very nice.
good piece of writing.
Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa
wah wah bahot khoob
Amal
February 20, 2006, 11:49am
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Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm’aiN bujhaateY rehnaa
Yaad uss ko woh ehd-e-wafaa ho kaY naa ho
Mujh ko hai Charaagh umeed kaY jalaateY rehnaa
JaanaY waalaY ko kabhi aana tau naheeN hai laikin
Sar-e-Raah palkoN ko, hur dumm bichaateY rehnaa
Hai sharamsaar Ishq, Mohabbat Sar nigooN hai laikin
QissaY mohabbat kaY Anwaar phir bhee sunaateY rehnaa
Anwaar you must have done Farhat Abbas Shah proud. Acha istimaal kia hey unki ‘zameen’ ko aap ney :k:…saari ghazal hi bohat umda hey, lekin ye quoted aashaar mujhey ziaada pasand aaey…thanx very much for sharing it here and coming out of your ‘retirement’
AQ
February 21, 2006, 3:10am
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Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm’aiN bujhaateY rehnaa
thanks everyone…
Amal: that meant a lot to me
Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa
buhat khoobsoorat ghazal likhi hai aap ne
safeena
February 24, 2006, 4:43pm
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Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa
woww that's a very beautiful poem..!
Pakeeza
February 24, 2006, 6:28pm
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Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa
''Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa''
Raat mein to pehley hi andhera hota hey phir kuch bhi nazar nahi aaey ga ager shamein bhi bujha di..:-d
AQ
February 27, 2006, 6:15am
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Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa
thank u every 1 :)
Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa
Excellent!
One of my old poems . Some of you who have access to my private journal entries might have read it there...
Sharing it after the goodwill gesture from our new moderator Amal...
Farhat Abbas Shah kay in dau asha'r kee zameen maiN likhi gaYee hai:
*Laakh doori ho magar Ehd nibhaataY rehna
Jub bhee Baarish ho mera soug manaatay rehna
Tum gaYe ho tau sar-e-shaam ye aadat Thehri
Bus kinaaray pay khaRay haath hilaatay rehna
*
Sar-e-Shaam, nazraiN falak pe jamaateY rehnaa
TooT-tey taaroN saY qismat ko bachaateY rehnaa
Chaand maiN dekhtaa hooN jub bhee maiN soorat uss kee
Saath muskaan kay ik daagh chehraY pe sajaateY rehnaa
Yaad uss ko woh ehd-e-wafaa ho kaY naa ho
Mujh ko hai Charaagh umeed kaY jalaateY rehnaa
JaanaY waalaY ko kabhi aana tau naheeN hai laikin
Sar-e-Raah palkoN ko, hur dumm bichaateY rehnaa
Yaad jo kabhi aataY haiN lamhaY woh Maah-e-December kaY
Dil maiN buss phir Soch kay deep jalaateY rehnaa
Woh uss kee bay Wafaayee, Woh bay Rukhi, woh Sard Mehri
Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa
Hai sharamsaar Ishq, Mohabbat Sar nigooN hai laikin
QissaY mohabbat kaY Anwaar phir bhee sunaateY rehnaa
12:29 AM 7/26/2005
AQ
March 8, 2006, 1:55am
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Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa
Thanks Dushwari :)
fghd
March 10, 2006, 3:11am
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Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm’aiN bujhaateY rehnaa
LOVE IT AQ!! :k:
Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa
A nice one,
achi lagi
Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa
nice one AQ keep it up :)
Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm’aiN bujhaateY rehnaa
Good one Anwaar :k:
Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm’aiN bujhaateY rehnaa
Boht khoob :k: