Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa

One of my old poems . Some of you who have access to my private journal entries might have read it there…

Sharing it after the goodwill gesture from our new moderator Amal…


Farhat Abbas Shah kay in dau asha’r kee zameen maiN likhi gaYee hai:

*Laakh doori ho magar Ehd nibhaataY rehna
Jub bhee Baarish ho mera soug manaatay rehna

Tum gaYe ho tau sar-e-shaam ye aadat Thehri
Bus kinaaray pay khaRay haath hilaatay rehna
*

Sar-e-Shaam, nazraiN falak pe jamaateY rehnaa
TooT-tey taaroN saY qismat ko bachaateY rehnaa

Chaand maiN dekhtaa hooN jub bhee maiN soorat uss kee
Saath muskaan kay ik daagh chehraY pe sajaateY rehnaa

Yaad uss ko woh ehd-e-wafaa ho kaY naa ho
Mujh ko hai Charaagh umeed kaY jalaateY rehnaa

JaanaY waalaY ko kabhi aana tau naheeN hai laikin
Sar-e-Raah palkoN ko, hur dumm bichaateY rehnaa

Yaad jo kabhi aataY haiN lamhaY woh Maah-e-December kaY
Dil maiN buss phir Soch kay deep jalaateY rehnaa

Woh uss kee bay Wafaayee, Woh bay Rukhi, woh Sard Mehri
Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm’aiN bujhaateY rehnaa

Hai sharamsaar Ishq, Mohabbat Sar nigooN hai laikin
QissaY mohabbat kaY Anwaar phir bhee sunaateY rehnaa

12:29 AM 7/26/2005

Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa

very nice.

good piece of writing.

Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa

wah wah bahot khoob

Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm’aiN bujhaateY rehnaa

Anwaar you must have done Farhat Abbas Shah proud. Acha istimaal kia hey unki ‘zameen’ ko aap ney :k:…saari ghazal hi bohat umda hey, lekin ye quoted aashaar mujhey ziaada pasand aaey…thanx very much for sharing it here and coming out of your ‘retirement’ :wink:

Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm’aiN bujhaateY rehnaa

thanks everyone…

Amal: that meant a lot to me :flower1:

Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa

buhat khoobsoorat ghazal likhi hai aap ne

Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa

woww that's a very beautiful poem..!

Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa

''Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa''

Raat mein to pehley hi andhera hota hey phir kuch bhi nazar nahi aaey ga ager shamein bhi bujha di..:-d

Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa

thank u every 1 :)

Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa

Excellent!

Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa

Thanks Dushwari :)

Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm’aiN bujhaateY rehnaa

LOVE IT AQ!! :k:

Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa

A nice one,

achi lagi

Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm'aiN bujhaateY rehnaa

nice one AQ keep it up :)

Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm’aiN bujhaateY rehnaa

Good one Anwaar :k:

Re: Raat maiN bhee abb tau shamm’aiN bujhaateY rehnaa

Boht khoob :k: