~~Raat bhar rotay rahay~~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Us ki judahi ma hm raat bhar rotay rahay
Us ki yaad ahi tu her baat per rotay rahaay

Ek lamhay ko mil ker bicher gahay umer bhar kay lihay
Us shaks ko sooch ker jahnay kab taluk rotay rahay

Chand kay ro ba ro bathay thay hm jahnay kab say
kabhi sir jukah ker, daman ma mauh cupa ker rotay rahay

Athay nahi han loot ker loog jahnay walhay
Yeah bat samjatay samjatay di ko hm rotay rahay

Us shaks kay chalay jahnay say kitnay koab mayray toot gahay
Un kercihon ko samatay rahay aur yuhi rotay rahay

Samaj nahi sekha vo mayra khaloos ko RABI
Hm ek isi bat per umer bhar rotay rahay

Rabia Chaudhry

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welcome to gs

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and nice nazam

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welcome

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Khushamdeed Rabia

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:~)

~DuniyaaN ki Mehfilon se ukta geya huun Ya-Rab
kya Lutf anjuman ka jab DiL hi bujh geya ho~
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~kya Nazar dain jo koi Naie ArZoO karain
DiL mey tou Tootne kie bhie Himmat nahin rahi~

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Welcome

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaer hooN…

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Welcome

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Very nice

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very hi nice ghazal, however need improvementz…

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thanx 4 posting te sharing…
and
welcome…

God bless u all…

DerVaisH

Ai khuda jazba-e-ehsaas na bakhsha hota…
Acha hota ager pather ka tarasha hota…
Waja-e-tehQeer hon insanon mein insan ho ker…
Pather ka hota to inhe insanon ne pooja hota…