Raat Aur Rail

[hybridkamal]

Phir chali hai rail, station sey lehraati hui
neem shab ki khaamashi mein zair-e-lab gaati hui

Dagmagaati, jhoomti, seeti bajaati, khelti
waadi-o-kohsaar ki Thandi hawaa khaati hui

Jaisey maujoun kaa tarannum, jaisey jal pariyoun key geet
ik ik laiy mein hazaaron zamzamay gaati hui

Naunaihaaloun ko sunaati meethi meethi loriyaan
naazneenon ko sunehrey khwaab dikhlaati hui

Thokrein khaa kar lachakti, gungunaati, jhoomti
sarkhushi mein ghunghroouon ki taal par gaati hui

Naaz sey har morh par khaati hui sau paich-o-khamm
ik dulhan apni adaa sey aap sharmaati hui

Raat ki taareekiyon mein jhilmilati, kaanpti
patriyoun par duur tak seemab chalkaati hui

Jaisey aadhi raat ko nikli ho aik shaahi baraat
shaadiyaanon ki sadaa sey wajd mein aati hui

Seena-e-kohsaar par charhti hui be-ikhtiyaar
aik naagin jiss tarhan masti mein lahraati hui

Ik pahaari par dikhaati aabshaaron ki jhalak
ik beyaabaan mein chiraagh-e-toor dikhlaati hui

Justujoo mein manzil-e-maqsood ki diwaana-waar
apna sar dhunti, fizaa mein baal bikhraati hui

Chairtee aik wajd kay aalam mein saaz-e-sarmadi
ghaiz key aalam mein munh sey aag barsaati hui

Munh mein ghusti hai surangoun ke yakayak dour kar
dandanaati, cheekhti, chinghaarti, gaati hui

Safhaa-e-dil sey mitatti ahad-e-maazi key naqoosh
haal-o-mustaqbil key dilkash khwaab dikhlaati hui

Zad mein koi cheez aa jaye to uss ko pees kar
irtiqaa-e-zindagi kay raaz batlaati hui

ik ik harkat sey andaaz-e-baghaawat aashkaar
azmat-e-insaaniyat kay zamzamay gaati hui

Algharz urtii chali jaati hai bekhauf-o-khatar
shaayar-e-aatish nafas kaa khoon khaulaati hui

 **(Asrar-UL-Haq Majaz)**

[muqawwee123]

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Majaaz ko haq hai ke wo aisi nazm likhe.. Indian railway survives

[hybridkamal]

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hahaha.... agreed.

[KKF]

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Majaz saaHib ne zabardast nazam kahii…aur Khoob pazeeraaii huii…

…yeh baaliGhaan ke liye nazam thii aur ab maiN ek naGhma pesh kartaa huN jo tiflaan-e-GS ke liye hai. singer Ashok Kumar haiN [Kishore kumar’s elder brother]…warch the full video…

…in 60’s, Bollywood had introduced shareefana Rap Singing. enjoy!

[KKF]

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Majaaz ko haq hai ke wo aisi nazm likhe.. Indian railway survives

baat to aapkii saHeeH hai magar ab railways ameeroN kii sawaarii nahiiN rahegii...bas, bechaare Ghareeb hii safar kiyaa kareNge.

Indian kii Aviation Industry meN 'Open Sky' laws ne khalbali machaa dii...airfares have gone so low that Indian Railways has hard time competing. IR keeps raising the fares, sometimes twice a year, and that is reducing the gap between air-fares and rail-fares.

if you travel from Mumbai to Allahabad in First AC class of service [the highest class], you have to pay around Rs 4,500 [one way] for a distance of 1400 kms and you have to spend 17 hours on the train while Air India flies you in 2 hours for Rs. 4400 [with all taxes and charges]...not a sizable difference.

people with money now fly instead of taking trains...Railways has to reduce fares and increase speed of trains to stay competitive with airlines.

[muqawwee123]

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@Khalil KhaaN FaaKhta

baat to aapkii saHeeH hai magar ab railways ameeroN kii sawaarii nahiiN rahegii...bas, bechaare Ghareeb hii safar kiyaa kareNge.

Indian kii Aviation Industry meN 'Open Sky' laws ne khalbali machaa dii...airfares have gone so low that Indian Railways has hard time competing. IR keeps raising the fares, sometimes twice a year, and that is reducing the gap between air-fares and rail-fares.

if you travel from Mumbai to Allahabad in First AC class of service [the highest class], you have to pay around Rs 4,500 [one way] for a distance of 1400 kms and you have to spend 17 hours on the train while Air India flies you in 2 hours for Rs. 4400 [with all taxes and charges]...not a sizable difference.

people with money now fly instead of taking trains...Railways has to reduce fares and increase speed of trains to stay competitive with airlines.

thats good for public. time is also money

[KKF]

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thats good for public. time is also money

good but weaker and smaller airlines are going under or are bought by bigger ones...Air India is a Government Enterprise and to make it stay afloat it's the public who has to bail it out...consumers gain through lower fares but then they lose through increased taxes!

[muqawwee123]

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good but weaker and smaller airlines are going under or are bought by bigger ones...Air India is a Government Enterprise and to make it stay afloat it's the public who has to bail it out...consumers gain through lower fares but then they lose through increased taxes!

hamare haan agar tax ka benefit public ko kisi bhi form main mil jae to badi baat hai....

[KKF]

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hamare haan agar tax ka benefit public ko kisi bhi form main mil jae to badi baat hai....

oh...:( sad :(

kisii shareef army waale ko le aayeN...kam se kam usko vote kii laalch to nahiiN hogii aur vo 'mufaahimat kii siyaasat' to nahiiN karegaa.

[hybridkamal]

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Majaaz ko haq hai ke wo aisi nazm likhe.. Indian railway survives

Paki trains ke liye yeh lines suitable hein

*patriyaan
laiti hui
aik doosrey kou dekhti hein,
kia hum
train ke intezaar mein
bench
hou jaaein gai?
*

[muqawwee123]

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@hybridkamal

Paki trains ke liye yeh lines suitable hein

**patriyaan
laiti hui
aik doosrey kou dekhti hein,
kia hum
train ke intezaar mein
bench
hou jaaein gai?
**

shayar aage farmata hai:

ab yahan koi nahin koi nahin aae ga… khudkushi karne ke liye bhi koi nahin

[KKF]

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@muqawwee123

shayar aage farmata hai:

ab yahan koi nahin koi nahin aae ga… khudkushi karne ke liye bhi koi nahin

hahaha…OMG…how true:

ek aadmii tracks pe naashtedaan [tiffin carrier] le ke baiThaa thaa…kisii ne poochhaa k bhai yahaN kiuN baiThe ho? vo bolaa k Khudkushii karnii hai…is par dusra banda Hairaan huaa aur poochh baiThaa k bhai vo to Theek hai k Khudkushii kii niyat se baiThe ho idhar par yeh naashtedaan kiuN saath laaye…is par vo haNs kar bolaa k are bhaijaan agar gaaRii late ho gaii to?