Raat aankhoN pe dhali palkoN pe jugnoo aaye

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Amal February 17, 2011, 8:12pm 1

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Raat aankhoN pe dhali palkoN pe jugnoo aaye
ham hawaoN ki tarah jaa k usey chhoo aaye

uska dil dil nahiN patthar ka kaleja hoga
jisko phooloN ka hunar aansoo ka jadoo aaye

bas gayi hey merey ehsaas meiN ye kesi mehak
koi khushboo meiN lagaooN teri khushboo aaye

khubsurat heiN boht dunya ke jhootey waadey
phool kagaz ke liye kaanch ke bazoo aaye

us ne chhoo kar mujhey pathhar se phir insaan kiya
muddatoN baad meri aankhoN meiN aansoo aaye
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_Masoom_Muskaan February 17, 2011, 8:41pm 2

Re: Raat aankhoN pe dhali palkoN pe jugnoo aaye

last line ne rula dia

UZ February 17, 2011, 8:49pm 3

Re: Raat aankhoN pe dhali palkoN pe jugnoo aaye

kis kis sher ki tareef ki jaaye is ghazal kaa her sher hi umda hai kaya baat hai :k:

fara February 17, 2011, 9:26pm 4

Re: Raat aankhoN pe dhali palkoN pe jugnoo aaye

Wow.. zabardast ghazal. Mujhay buhat buhat achi laggi hay... har misra aik say berdh ker aik hay...

Koyal February 18, 2011, 3:08am 5

Re: Raat aankhoN pe dhali palkoN pe jugnoo aaye

Nice 1 Amal :)

Amal February 18, 2011, 7:57am 6

Re: Raat aankhoN pe dhali palkoN pe jugnoo aaye

No Muskaan :nono:

Thanx UZ

Thanx for liking it fara ji

Shukriya Koyal ji

Southie February 19, 2011, 7:39am 7

Re: Raat aankhoN pe dhali palkoN pe jugnoo aaye

"us ne chhoo kar mujhey pathhar se phir insaan kiya
muddatoN baad meri aankhoN meiN aansoo aaye "

Shabash!

pktun February 19, 2011, 10:05am 8

Re: Raat aankhoN pe dhali palkoN pe jugnoo aaye

Wow nyc Amal