RAAmZ

tum jab aogi to khoya hua pao gi mujhe
meri tanhai mein khwabon kay siwa kuch bhi nahi

meray kamre ko sajane ki tamanna hai tumhe,
mery kamre mein kitabon ke siwa kuch bhi nahi

in kitabon ne bara zulm kia hai mujh per
in mein ik ramz hai uss ramz ka maara hua shuks

mushda’e ishrat’e anjam nahi pa sakta
zindagi mein kabhi aram nahi pa sakta

Re: RAAmZ

Hmm wah i like urs choice…:k:

:smash:

Nice.

Re: RAAmZ

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*Originally posted by CHhutki: *
tum jab aogi to khoya hua pao gi mujhe
meri tanhai mein khwabon kay siwa kuch bhi nahi

meray kamre ko sajane ki tamanna hai tumhe,
mery kamre mein kitabon ke siwa kuch bhi nahi

in kitabon ne bara zulm kia hai mujh per
in mein ik ramz hai uss ramz ka maara hua shuks

mushda'e ishrat'e anjam nahi pa sakta
zindagi mein kabhi aram nahi pa sakta
[/QUOTE]

Aisay alfaaz parhne ke baad woh toaane se rahee ;)

zaburdust choice......
keep it up

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

Aisay alfaaz parhne ke baad woh toaane se rahee ;)
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han han usko to sonu nigham ke gane sunnao

dhuup me.n nikalo ghaTaao.n me.n nahaa kar dekho

dhuup me.n nikalo ghaTaao.n me.n nahaa kar dekho
zindagii kyaa hai kitaabo.n ko haTaa kar dekho

vo sitaaraa hai chamakane do yuu.N hii aa.Nkho.n me.n
kyaa zaruurii hai use jism banaakar dekho

pattharo.n me.n bhii zubaa.N hotii hai dil hote hai.n
apane ghar kii dar-o-diivaar sajaa kar dekho

faasalaa nazaro.n kaa dhokaa bhii to ho sakataa hai
vo mile yaa na mile haath ba.Daa kar dekho

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by CHhutki: *

han han usko to sonu nigham ke gane sunnao
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aur naheen to kia usko ibn-e-insha ke shair sunoon kia...insha jee utho ab kooch karo ;)

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

aur naheen to kia usko ibn-e-insha ke shair sunoon kia...insha jee utho ab kooch karo ;)
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waisey insha g key bohut se romantic poetry bhi hai