**Hijar Tara ab Doob Chala Hai Dhalny Lagi Hai Raat WaSi
Tere Baad Yeh Dunya Walay Mujh Ko Pagal Kar Dain Ge
Yun Hi Chup Ki Mohar Laga Kar Kab Tak Gum Sum Betho Ge
Aaj tO Us Ka Chehra B Kuch Badla Badla Lagta Hai
Mere Ghar Khushbu Ka Yeh Raqs Usi Ke Dam Se Hai
Chor Wasi Ab Us Ki Yadein Tujh Ko Pagal Kar Dain Gi
Re: Qatra-Darya
Nice one bro.
Being posted here on monthly basis...
KKF
May 19, 2012, 6:17pm
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Re: Qatra-Darya
yeh pahli Ghazal merii nazar se guzrii hai jis meN shaa'ir ne har she'r meN apnaa taKhallus iste'mala kiyaa hai jisse Ghazal kaa har she'r maqt'a ban gayaa. chuN k matl'a meN bhii aksar ustaad sho'araa ne apnaa taKhallus musta'mil kiyaa hai is liye yeh ek mukammil Ghazal hai jis meN radeef hai "shaa'ir kaa apnaa taKhallus="Wasi". mujhe is baat kaa 'ilm nahiiN k aayaa urdu shaa'irii meN aisaa jaa'iz hai yaa nahiiN...apnii aaraa se nawaaziyegaa. :)
Re: Qatra-Darya
Wasi Shah ne ye ghazal likh kar bid’ati hone ka bharpoor muzahira kia hai
Re: Qatra-Darya
Urdu shayari main ek nayi rivayat daal ke.
LP
May 19, 2012, 7:53pm
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Re: Qatra-Darya
you mean using his name too often?
LP
May 19, 2012, 7:57pm
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Re: Qatra-Darya
but how is that bid’ati:konfused:
KKF
May 19, 2012, 7:58pm
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Re: Qatra-Darya
shaa’irii men bid’at hai lol
LP
May 19, 2012, 7:59pm
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Re: Qatra-Darya
you mean an innovation that isnt an actual part of shayeri
Re: Qatra-Darya
Yes LP you got it right :)
LP
May 19, 2012, 9:34pm
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Re: Qatra-Darya
you arent asleep at this time ?
Re: Qatra-Darya
Main soke uth gaya hoon.. bijli ki aankh micholi jari hai
LP
May 19, 2012, 9:36pm
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Re: Qatra-Darya
oh :(
Re: Qatra-Darya
Ab to aadat si hai mujhko aise jeene main
LP
May 19, 2012, 9:40pm
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Re: Qatra-Darya
aadat nahi daaliye…work towards removing the prob:smack:
Muqwee Bhai ne bhii Khoob istilaaH talaash kii 
