Qasam tujhe merey her aik khuwab ki

Asif_M.Ali · July 17, 2003, 1:37pm

Mujhe Chor ke Na’a Jaa’Naa

Qasam tujhe merey her aik khuwab ki, mujhe chor ke na’a jaana
S’ang ma’arna, zakham dena, dhoka kerna, per lot ker wapis aa jaana
agar miley her derv’aaza band tujhe terey roshnee ke shehar ka
to meree andheree galiyon main merey sath bathak-ne aa jaana

Tu samjhe ya na samjhe, mera jo hai woh hai sab kuch tera
Jab tu ne kaha tha ke tu hai mera, mai ne sirf us ko sach mana
Tanha kiyu chor gaya es gulshan ko bahaar ke mausam mai
Kis kasotee se kihizaa ko tu ne sehra kee, behtar jaana?

Dunya to pehle hee hanstee thee meree qismat per
Tu aik aur hansne kaa naa de un ko bahana
Phir kiyu khara hai merey tu aangan mai anjaan kee tarah?
Kiya nahee tha pehley merey ghar mai, tera aana jaana?

Sazaa agar denee thee mujhe to meree zindage mai deta asif
Chor dey meree laash per roz aansoon bahana, phool charana

Swera · July 17, 2003, 1:51pm

Bohat khoob.

Mujjy chooR kay na jana:)

Asif_M.Ali · July 17, 2003, 1:55pm

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*Originally posted by Swera: *
Bohat khoob.

Mujjy chooR kay na jana:)
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Thanks, I am new writer. I will gretly apprecaite constructive critism, advice, recommendation and or ur support :)

-- Asif

Swera · July 17, 2003, 2:07pm

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*Originally posted by Asif M. Ali: *

Thanks, I am new writer. I will gretly apprecaite constructive critism, advice, recommendation and or ur support :)

-- Asif
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Ahan...U r doing a wonderfull job ,really....
Ya wali to achi hay and main nay paRi bhi yahi hay:)

Keep it up..

Amal · July 17, 2003, 2:34pm

Very nice Asif:k:…keep writing and welcome to GS:)

Asif_M.Ali · July 17, 2003, 2:35pm

Thanks Amal -

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · July 17, 2003, 3:20pm

Re: Qasam tujhe merey her aik khuwab ki

''dhoka karna, lot ker wapis aa jaana''

what do you mean by this? ^

anyway nice try, keep it up & thanks for sharing.

system · July 17, 2003, 4:29pm

beautiful, bohat achi hai..
keep it up :k::k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 17, 2003, 4:37pm

beautiful :k:

Asif_M.Ali · July 17, 2003, 5:27pm

Re: Re: Qasam tujhe merey her aik khuwab ki

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*Originally posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh: *
''dhoka karna, lot ker wapis aa jaana''

what do you mean by this? ^

anyway nice try, keep it up & thanks for sharing.
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Maaf kerney wala saza deney wala se behtar hota hai, THats what I meant :)

Asif_M.Ali · July 17, 2003, 5:28pm

Thanks Viva - Asif

Dilsay · July 17, 2003, 6:37pm

Very nice and welcome