Qafas hai bus main Tumhare

muqawwee123 · October 4, 2013, 6:14am

قفس ہے بس میں تمہارے، تمہارے بس میں نہیں

۔ چمن میں آتش گل کے نکھار کا موسم

tarash · October 4, 2013, 4:43pm

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kuch be tarteeba sa lagta hai

muqawwee123 · October 4, 2013, 4:44pm

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Faiz Saheb ka shair hai.. Faisal Sabzwari ne tweet kia hai.. tarteeb ka koi masla nahin.. aap ghor se paRhen

khubsoorat · October 4, 2013, 4:45pm

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Kuch khas samajh nhi aya waise mujhy

muqawwee123 · October 4, 2013, 4:46pm

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Poori ghazal hazir e khidmat hai

Rawish rawish hai wohi intazar ka mausam
Nahi hai koyi bhi mausam,bahar ka mausam

Giran hai dil pe gham-e-rozgar ka mosam
Hai aazmaish-e husn-e-nigar ka mausam

Khosha nazara-e rukhsar-e-yaar ki sa’at
Khosha qarar-e-dil-e-bayqarar ka mausam

Hadis-e-bada o saqi nahin to kis masraf
Kharam-e-abre sar-e-kuhsaar ka mausam

Naseb-e-suhbat-e-yaran nahin to kia kijiay
Ye raqs-e-saya-e-saro o chinar ka mausam

dil k daag to dukhte thay yun b per kum kum
kuch ab ke aur hy hijran-e-yaar ka mausam

Yahi jano ke, yahi tauq-o-daar ka mausam
Yahi hai jabr, yahi ikhtiar ka mausam

**Qafas hai bus main,tumharay bus main nahen
Chaman main atish-e-gul kay nikhar ka mausam
**
Saba ki mast kharaami tahe kamand nahin
Aseer-e-dam nahin hai bahar ka mausam

Bala se hum ne na daikha aur to daikhenge
Farogh-e-gulshan o soat e hazar ka mausam

tarash · October 4, 2013, 4:51pm

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**Qafas hai bus main,
tumharay bus main nahen
Chaman main atish-e-gul kay nikhar ka mausam

mujhy jo samajh ie hai k line#2 ka ta’aluq line#3 se hai

**

muqawwee123 · October 4, 2013, 4:53pm

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sahi samajh aai hai.. ab aap shair ko prose mat banaiye

khubsoorat · October 4, 2013, 4:56pm

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mujhy nhi samajh aye bht mushkil shair hai, Faiz sahab ki personal life se related hai shyd

muqawwee123 · October 4, 2013, 4:58pm

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Mujhe bhi 3-4 dafa padh kar samajh aay tha.. agar Faisal Sabzwari ne post nahin kia hota aur MQM ki current situation ka pata nahin hota to mujhe bhi samajh nahin aata

tarash · October 4, 2013, 5:00pm

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warna faiz sahb naraz ho jaein gy

khubsoorat · October 4, 2013, 5:03pm

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MQM achi hint hy :k: pehli line to samajh a gye …

muqawwee123 · October 4, 2013, 5:04pm

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chalen main aasan kar deta hoon:

Qafas hai bus main, per tumharay bus main nahen
Chaman main atish-e-gul kay nikhar ka mausam

per izafai hai, iss se shair ke wazan per asar padta.. aur sakta bhi aa jata

tarash · October 4, 2013, 5:06pm

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baghair zehn pe zor deay asal matlab samajh nahin aata

khubsoorat · October 4, 2013, 5:07pm

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Hmmm its helpful,but mujhy MQM se zyada jaldi samjh aye hai

muqawwee123 · October 4, 2013, 5:08pm

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facebook wali shayari padh kar mushkil shair samjhna mushkil hogaya hai :halo:

tarash · October 4, 2013, 5:09pm

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shukar hai samajh to aa gye

tarash · October 4, 2013, 5:09pm

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zehn pe zor dena mushkil ho gya hai

enter10 · October 5, 2013, 2:04am

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Nice

muqawwee123 · October 5, 2013, 2:06am

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samajh aai?

enter10 · October 5, 2013, 2:09am

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Aap ny tashreeh ki to hy…