Pyaray Abu Jaldi Ana...

fara · April 26, 2012, 5:19pm

**Daikho Yeh Ek Laash Pari Hai, Lahou Main Luthri, **

Khaak Aaluda, Bikhri Bikhri…

Ghair Ya Apna, Kon Hai Janay?

Aao Daikhain Aur Pehchanain…

Naqsh Mita Daalay Goli Nai,

Rangat Khoon Main Doob Gai Hai...

Jaib Tatolo Kya Rakha Hai?

Ye Dou Khoon Say Tur Gajray Hain,

Das Das Kae Dow Note Rakhain Hain

Haat Jo Neechay Daba Howa Hai,

Is Ki Sakht Girft Main Kya Hai?

Shayad Hai School Ka Basta...

Ye Ek Parcha Hai, Khat Hai Shayad...

Toti Phooti Si Urdu Main,

Rangeen Pencil Kae Rangoun Sai Likha Howa Hai...

Aj Jo Bhoolay Basta Mera,

Naraaz Ho Jaye Gi Ap Sai Guriya...

Toffe Aur Biscuit Bhi Lana,

Pyaray Abu Jaldi Ana…

iamtheonlybeing · April 26, 2012, 5:21pm

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painful

muqawwee123 · April 26, 2012, 5:22pm

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:hinna: Allah sab ke pyaron ko apne hifz o amaan main rakhe

iamtheonlybeing · April 26, 2012, 5:24pm

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aameen......

i can not like this poem :(

muqawwee123 · April 26, 2012, 5:26pm

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But it portrays the facts of our societies. I think this type of poetry is far better than the news channels that have made killing of people just a number.

iamtheonlybeing · April 26, 2012, 5:29pm

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aaap ne theek kaha... ye poem bht khoobsurat hai magar main iss leay like nahi kar sakti as i dont want this to happen :(

muqawwee123 · April 26, 2012, 5:34pm

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Yes that why I said 'Allah sab ke pyaron ko apne hifz o amaan main rakhe'.

fara · April 26, 2012, 5:35pm

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Not everything has to be liked, its just a portrait of the current situation of our beloved Pakistan.

Hum un murghiyooN ki terhan hain ju jub tuk qasayee kay hathooN say mehfooz hain, apni zindagi main magan hain..

Hum sub apni nafsa nafsi main mubtilaa haiN, ek lamha dosray ka dukh mehsoos huta hay phir wohi apni zindagi ki hama-hami..

iamtheonlybeing · April 26, 2012, 5:35pm

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and dats why mainay aapka comment like ker dia

iamtheonlybeing · April 26, 2012, 5:36pm

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rightly said!

PS:

aks e janaa ki khair ho Rabba
khuaab aankhon samait toota hai (loved it)

Dania · April 26, 2012, 6:49pm

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very touchy

Sannan · April 27, 2012, 5:53am

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:hinna:

:k: