jiia
July 31, 2011, 1:31pm
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apni bohat dear friend INNOCENT SMILE key naaaaaam
jo hey jese hi ki BUNEAAD per:@:
JANE YI KONSE ZINDGI BASAR KER RAHI HUN MI
SAANS LEY RAHE HUN MAGAR MAR RAHI HUN MI
muj pe na khul sake yi sabr-o raza k phalsaphy
khon pe rahi hun ki jamy sabar bhar rahi hun mi
ZAMEN PE UTRON To Vo KHAK BASAR NA KER DEN
JIN BANHON KE ASMAN PI SAFAR KER RAHI HUN MI
rafaqaton mi bhali thi ke tera hijar raas hi muj ko
sambhal gae thi ke ab sambhal ke gir rahi hun mi
KHABAR NAHI ZEHER OSMI BHAR DIA HI LOGON NE
YA PHIR OS KI ZINDAGI KO ZEHER KER RAHI HUN MI
Amal
July 31, 2011, 1:59pm
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Re: PURI ghazal INNOCENT SMILE ki FARMAESH per
Achi ghazal kahi hey jiia saheba...mashq-e-sukhan jaari-o-saari rakhye... :)
KKF
July 31, 2011, 2:04pm
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Re: PURI ghazal INNOCENT SMILE ki FARMAESH per
hai mashq-e-suKhan jaarii, chakki kii mashaqqat bhii
ik turfa tamaashaa hai "Jia Jii" kii tabii'yat bhii ** :D
bahot achchhii hai Ghazal aur is baar mA paRhne meN utnii mushkil nahiiN huii :D pahlaa she'r bahot achchhaa hai maashaa Allah.
***Allah kare zor-e-aamad aur ziyaada!!! :) *
Re: PURI ghazal INNOCENT SMILE ki FARMAESH per
Wah, bohat khoob.
jiia
July 31, 2011, 3:48pm
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Re: PURI ghazal INNOCENT SMILE ki FARMAESH per
es k liay MASHWARAH NAHI aap Ki DUa CHAHiay:@:
HOSLAH AFZAEE K Liay
Aryaan
August 1, 2011, 12:02am
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Re: PURI ghazal INNOCENT SMILE ki FARMAESH per
Wah Kya baat hai aapki Jiia …
jiia
August 2, 2011, 3:28am
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NAWAZISH
muqarrar irshad farmate rahien MABADOLAT KHOSH HUEN
hai mashq-e-suKhan jaarii, chakki kii mashaqqat bhii
ik turfa tamaashaa hai "Jia Jii" kii tabii'yat bhii ** :D
bahot achchhii hai Ghazal aur is baar mA paRhne meN utnii mushkil nahiiN huii :D pahlaa she'r bahot achchhaa hai maashaa Allah.
***Allah kare zor-e-aamad aur ziyaada!!! :) *
pktun
August 2, 2011, 4:13am
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Re: PURI ghazal INNOCENT SMILE ki FARMAESH per
jiia:
apni bohat dear friend INNOCENT SMILE key naaaaaam
jo hey jese hi ki BUNEAAD per:@:
JANE YI KONSE ZINDGI BASAR KER RAHI HUN MI
SAANS LEY RAHE HUN MAGAR MAR RAHI HUN MI
muj pe na khul sake yi sabr-o raza k phalsaphy
khon pe rahi hun ki jamy sabar bhar rahi hun mi
ZAMEN PE UTRON To Vo KHAK BASAR NA KER DEN
JIN BANHON KE ASMAN PI SAFAR KER RAHI HUN MI
rafaqaton mi bhali thi ke tera hijar raas hi muj ko
sambhal gae thi ke ab sambhal ke gir rahi hun mi
KHABAR NAHI ZEHER OSMI BHAR DIA HI LOGON NE
YA PHIR OS KI ZINDAGI KO ZEHER KER RAHI HUN MI
ye me ko yaad nae aara me ne kahan parrhi thi is peley
**jis ko ded ki , wo gaib hai **
achi try hai koshish krti rao, aik din hmari suni jaegi
jiia
August 2, 2011, 4:19am
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UZ
August 2, 2011, 4:28am
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Nice one Jia :k:
pktun
August 2, 2011, 4:28am
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yaad aagya hai mgr btaonga nae
Is sis ko bura lgega
jiia
August 2, 2011, 4:32am
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Re: PURI ghazal INNOCENT SMILE ki FARMAESH per
4 kha k yaad agaya,mujy mayusi hue ,mushkal se muqa mila tha:chupki:
SIS:5:
UZ
August 2, 2011, 4:36am
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pktun why don’t you post some of your own poetry
jiia
August 2, 2011, 4:39am
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thanks UZ
pktun
August 2, 2011, 4:39am
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jo u ne maarey they wo me ko lagey hi nae Hawaeiiii firing krti raeiii hai mouqey dhoondney wali
pktun
August 2, 2011, 4:41am
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Re: PURI ghazal INNOCENT SMILE ki FARMAESH per
**g zaroooooooor **
lekin jiia jesa haal nae hona chahyey
UZ
August 2, 2011, 11:37am
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Re: PURI ghazal INNOCENT SMILE ki FARMAESH per
post karo phir bataoon gi
babri
August 2, 2011, 12:37pm
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bohat khoob hai :)
Re: PURI ghazal INNOCENT SMILE ki FARMAESH per
main ne nai parhri
jiia
August 2, 2011, 5:48pm
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Re: PURI ghazal INNOCENT SMILE ki FARMAESH per
mera kia haal hi:emmy: apni av DEKHI:sannan: