Sheer light on my face
I found the promised land
A clear quiet holy spring
And a braided shallow river
Flowing midst high grass
Delicious plentifull fruits trees
And tilted rocky hills around
But i know you can’t be there
You are long dead
Even your bones disapeared
From you no one else care
All yours are dead but me
So I wonder why I am
All alone stranded here
I can understand this world
As the robot God created
But i can’t feel it
All my flesh and brain
As cold as your dead body
I am a ghost wandering
Traveling this world
Looking for you
Hopelessly
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nice work
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we don 't think that our noor is a poet too.thanx 4 sharing ur poetry with us
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never watched matrix in american, only the first one and in french, so…this verse is mine 
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^ First one is the Best... Coz Life is LIke Matrix ;)
Its only Upto Ur will If U wana have Blue Pill or Red Pill.... If U want to Follow the White Rabbit or not :)