poetry i wrote this but dnt know what u guyss think about that plzzz comment

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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IN GHUSTHAK ANKHOO NE UNE BAR BAR DAKHA
KU DAKHA YE NA MALOOM MUJE
BARHAL IN GUSTHAK ANKHOO NE UNE BAR BAR DAKHA
DAKHA YUN K MEHSOS NA HO UNE
UN KA WADA B PORA HO GYA
AUR DIL KA IRADA B PORA HO GYA
( JB )

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Re: poetry i wrote this but dnt know what u guyss think about that plzzz comment

:smash:ese gustakh ki to aankhen nikal di jain :what:

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Re: poetry i wrote this but dnt know what u guyss think about that plzzz comment

Get a urdu typing thing…
wesy bari baat hy kafia aur radeef milty heen … :snooty:

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Re: poetry i wrote this but dnt know what u guyss think about that plzzz comment

good effort. aap main wo hiss aur salahiyat mojud hai jo shair likhne ki ibtida hoti hai. :k:

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Re: poetry i wrote this but dnt know what u guyss think about that plzzz comment

After a long time a poet in town.

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vary powarful potery. thx.

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Aab Aik Baat Sach BataooN
Main Nay Un ko Dark Glasses Laga Kar
Baar Baar Daikha
Un Ko Kia Un Kay Mujhay
Khud naheeN maloom ko un Ko Daikha

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Re: poetry i wrote this but dnt know what u guyss think about that plzzz comment

baar baar dekho, hazaar baar dekho
yeh dekhne ki cheez hai humhara @TLK