Re: Poetry Forum ya Seyaasi Halqa !!!
hmmm.. makes sense...
Amal, Amal ki yahaaN kucH nahi amal-daari Khud apne naam se hi beir kucH janaab ka hai
behtar hotaa kaY aap ye bhee ista'aaroN, ishaaroN, kinaayoN maiN keh daitaY laikin Farhat aur Saad kee shaairi bhee aakhir aap nay paRhi hui hai.. hai kaY naheeN :P?
Ye post karte huey mujhe bakhoobi andaaza tha k yehi she’r meri post k weak point hai aur is par sawaal kia jaaye ga. Ye she’r likhne ka mera koi iraada tha bhi nahi lekin ye 17 ash’aar main ne direct message window mein likhe they so us waqt aamad ka kya aalam ho sakta hai ye koi shaayar hi samajh sakta hai aur aaise mein is she’r ka pehla misra bana banaaya utar aaya so main ne tabdeel kiye baghair likh dia. Main bilkul qubool karta huN k jab main ne aur kisi ka naam nahi lia to Amal ka naam bhi nahi lena chaahiye tha. Is she’r k liye main maazrat karta huN lekin is se haqeeqat badal nahi jaaye gi. Ghaaliban aap hi ne eik baar kaha tha k “u r an asset to this place”, lekin mujhe pata hai k Zamil ki kya auqaat hai, Zamil agar yahaN se ghaayab ho jaaye to shayad eik aadhe k siva koi yaad bhi na kare k Zamil kahaN gaya<ST1:p</ST1:p. Lekin Amal ki eik haisiyat hai yahaN, Amal k be-shumaar chaahne waale hain, kya main ne itne arse mein observe nahi kia k jab bhi Amal koi thread shuru karta hai, na-jaane kaun kaun se konoN se log nikal kar reply karne lagte hain. So Amal ko chaahiye k apni haisiyat ka istemaal kare, kucH na kucH karta rahe yahaN, raunaq to lage gi, kucH jaan to paRe gi forum mein.<O:p</O:p
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Khair ye sab sirf aap ki baat k jawaab mein likh <ST1:pvarna </ST1:pmera main maqsad wohi hai jo main pehle bayaan kar chuka huN.