Re: Poetry Forum ya Seyaasi Halqa !!!
Poetry Forum ya Seyaasi Halqa !!!
Official intro for Poetry Forums from the GS Administration:
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A place to express yourself. Did you just remember a great piece of poetry? Or you made up something? Put it here. Let us all read you!
Hum kisi ko mehaz is leeye likhney sey nahi rok saktey ke koi muaasharti haqaaiq aur ravaiyoN ki baat kar raha hey: Baqol Faiz: Aur bhi dukh heiN zamaaney meiN mohabbat ke siwa :~) You may disagree with me, as I very regretfully do with you. I am sorry.
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Muaasharti haqaaiq aur ravayyoN ki baat....
Huzoor shayad main apni baat waazeh nahi keh paaya, bhala mujhe kab aaitraaz hai is baare mein likhne par, main to ye keh raha huN;
CHupe cHupe hoN mazameeN yehi taghazzul hai
Hai inqalaab ka sauda to inqalaab likho
Main maanta huN k ye waqt iztaraab ka hai
Magar Khuda k liye soch kar likho logo
Huroof ki bhi pakaR hai, peher hisaab ka hai
Jo seedhi baat hi karni hai to "nasar" likh lo
Nazaar "nazm" pe kiyuN waqt ye itaab ka hai !!!
Ye sinf sirf "zubaaN" ki taraqqiyoN k liye
Par is ka haal hai wo jo dil-e-kharaab ka hai
Ab shayad meri baat waazeh hui ho...
Dosto, shaairy ki rooh ko samajhiye, aap apni baat bhi kar lein, samajhne waale samajh bhi lein aur koi aap k lafz pakaR bhi na sake. Agar seedhi seedhi ungliyaaN uThaani hain to nasar is kaam k liye best hai, Urdu sho'raa ne jitna faiz Urdu zubaan ko pohNchaaya hai shayaad hi kisi aur sinf k logoN ne pohNchaaya ho. Sirf isi liye main Farhat aur Saad jaise shaairoN ko sahi shaayar nahi samajhta.
Ab mera ye she'r dekhiye;
Beta mera namaaz ko masjid gaya tha aaj
Maatam k liye laash bhi baaqi naheeN rahi
Main ne is tarha k sabhi waaqeaat ka zikr is she'r mein kia hai, kisi eik khaas waaqe ko point out nahi kia, Nishtar Park ka naam nahi lia, Kisi Masjid ka naam nahi lia. Main ne apne she'r ki misaal is liye nahi d k main koi baRa shaayar huN, sirf eik example d hai. Sab ko pata hai k Karachi mein kya hota raha hai, Mohsin ne Karachi ka naam le kar apne she'r ko baandha nahi, ye she'r dekhiye Mohsin ka;
Qatl cHupte they kabhi sang ki deewaar k beech
Ab to khulne lage maqtal bhare baazaar k beech
Taghazzul ki rooh ko samajhiye khudaara, tashbeeh, ista'aara, ye sab shaairy k johar hain, dimaagh laRaaiye, mehnat kijiye, arq reizi hi nikhaar laaye gi kalaam mein. Main aaj ye baat daawe se keh sakta huN k agar seedhi seedhi baatein karni hoN to shaayad main 1 laakh ghazlein bhi aaraam se likh sakta huN.
Chalta huN,
Fee-Amaan Allah.