Poetry Contest

Hi friends lets start a game i will say a shear and the person who replies will have to continue it either by himself or the original shear so lets start ..shear can be changed after about 10-15 shaer..

ye gham nahi ke tum mujhe bhool jao ge
dukh to ye hae ke tum bohot yad aao ge

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Note::This Contest is different then the Bait Bazi here you will continue the same shaer not from the last letter

[This message has been edited by KhUbY PaKi (edited June 29, 2002).]

Sorry mujehy game ki samajh nahIn aai aap issko urdu meiN samjhaana pasand kareiNge?


**Ham Ehl-e-Qafas tanhaa bhi nahiN har roz Naseem-e-Subah-e-Watan
YaadoN se Mo`attar aati hai AshkoN se Munawwar jaati hai **

acha jee ok game kuch aaise hae ke mein ne jo shaer likha hae aap ne us ke sath milta julta shaer likhna hae (qafia milna chahiye)

~un se bichar key aaj fazaien udaas hain~
~sunsaan hae zameen hawaien udaas hain~

Ab aap ne is ko continue karna hae jaisey

~ik pal bhi jinkey sath guzara na tha kabhi~
~un key baghair apni nigahein udaas hain~

ok jee ab to sab ko samajh aa gai ho gi agar nahi to aap puch saktey hein

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Ohh ok Theek samajh gaiyaa
its Interesting ok
sochne dijyiee

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Mods acHey haiN mauqaa ki mufamehat ko samajh kar meri doubble reply ko muaaf kar deinge inshallah

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Qaafiaa hai
…ain Udaas haiN

(dekh lijyee ) kaafi kaafi dinoN baad reply aaiga ?)

That’s like posting shers from the same ghazal…isn’t it?

You can make your own sher too but it must be similar