Poetry Contest!!!! HIAKU

First let me explain what a Hiaku is ( this is the english adaptation not a traditional japanese one as you need to know how to write japanese for that)

“Haiku” is a traditional form of Japanese poetry. Haiku poems consist of 3 lines. The first and last lines of a Haiku have 5 syllables and the middle line has 7 syllables. The lines rarely rhyme.Here’s a Haiku to help you remember:[INDENT][INDENT]I am first with five
Then seven in the middle –
Five again to end.

another example

Green and speckled legs,
Hop on logs and lily pads
Splash in cool water.[/INDENT][/INDENT]Because Haikus are such short poems, they are usually written about things that are recognizable to the reader. Animals and seasons are examples of recognizable topics

SO what I would like you lovely Gupshuppers to do, is write a hiaku, in 7 days time I will create a thread which allows people to vote for the best Hiaku :slight_smile:

ENJOY!!!

Re: Poetry Contest!!! HIAKU

Hi I am the Jinx
I am just an unknown Gupshup member
doubt if anybody knows me

:blush:

Re: Poetry Contest!!! HIAKU

FAIL!

Syllables, you dig?
Its called a dictionary
Oh crap, you can’t read

Re: Poetry Contest!!!! HIAKU

atleast the jinx had a go!

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:(

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Careful with your rhymes
Follow the rules of Haiku
Else GIDSA says FAIL

Did I count right?

Re: Poetry Contest!!!! HIAKU

Y U DEFEND HIM?
Y U NO GIVE IT A GO?
Y I USE MEMES?

Re: Poetry Contest!!!! HIAKU

I struggle writting
HAIKU is not my teacup
but at least I tried

Re: Poetry Contest!!!! HIAKU

come on peeps!! its not thatt hard now is it!!

Re: Poetry Contest!!! HIAKU

Kash main bhi parha likha hota :hinna: