wo to khushbu hai hawaon main bikhar jayega
masla phul ka hai phul kidhar jayega
ham to samjhe the k ek zakhm hai bhar jayega
kya khabar thi k rag-e-jan main utar jayega
wo hawaon ki tarah khanabajan phirta hai
ek jhonka hai jo ayega guzar jayega
wo jab ayega to phir us ki rafaqat k liye
mausam-e-gul mere angan main thahar jayega
akhir wo bhi kahin ret pe baithi hogi
tera ye pyar bhi dariya hai utar jayega
babri
November 2, 2009, 9:18pm
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nice.
thanks for sharing with us
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thnx
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tera ye pyar bhi dariya hai utar jayega
:k:
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evergreen ghazal :k:
KKF
November 4, 2009, 5:23am
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Parveen Shakir over-rated shaira thiiN magar yeh Ghazal kitaabat kii muta'addid aGhlaat ke baa-vujuud achchhi hai. yeh meraa apnaa Khayaal thaa aur zaroori nahiiN k isse kisi ko koi ashkaal na ho :) share karne ke l;iye shukria :)
Kuch dayr tujh say kat gaee thee
Mehwar say zameen hat gaee thee
Hamain khabar hay hawa ka mizaj rakhtay ho
Magar yeh kia kay zara dayr ko rukay bhi naheen
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hashmat: mujhe aap ki baat ki bilkul samjh nahin ayi. I'm a bit lost. Sorry my urdu aint that good
nayab87
November 7, 2009, 10:19am
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buhat acchi ghazal share ki hai parveen shakir ki aap ne...
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shukria
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Bohat khoob