From the Votes I got, I am hereby announcing BLACK MAMBA ,
THE POET OF THE MONTH.
For His wonderful Stuff.
Congratulations Black Mamba
**Maazi maiN meray pyar ke jo phool khilay thay
har phool ke kaaNtoN se, kayi zakhm milay thay
Dunya ko batata maiN sitam yaar ke kaisay ?
chaha tha ussay dil se, meray lab tau silay thay
nafrat ke bhi qaabil nahiN samjha humaiN jis ne
chahat maiN hum, us shakhs ke, marnay ko chalay thay
har zulm pe uske, meri aahaiN theeN nikalteeN
har aah se laakhoN meray armaan juRay thay
Chaha agar ik pal ko bhi hota, mujhay uss ne
uske hi thay, jeewan ke meray din jo bachay thay
ro kar maiN karoN yaad Sabih, ya ke haNsoN maiN?
ik khwab ki bus aas maiN, wo din jo katay thay.**
(Black Mamba)
PS: Sorry for the Delay, Inshallah We will Be better next time
Aabi
January 4, 2005, 5:23am
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Wonderful poem
CONGRATS:flower1: Black Mamba
Re: Poet of the Month (December)
Bahut Bahut Mubarak Ho Lalay :k:
Re: Poet of the Month (December)
yeah yeah
Re: Poet of the Month (December)
I hate everything abt GS now …
argh …n my poem was better ..
Re: Poet of the Month (December)
congracts BM n very good decision GS :k:
DADDU
January 4, 2005, 3:13pm
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Congrats Dost it really is very nice one keep it up....
Re: Poet of the Month (December)
very nice! :k: zabardast; mujhe bhi sikhao ye sheyr kaise kehte hain?
Re: Poet of the Month (December)
HAY… BM… Where are You…
You need to Put the TOPIC Today for January…
ShoWSha .. Tnx… BUt its not my Decision .. Its Demeocracy
Re: Poet of the Month (December)
well done laaley ki jaaan. khush rahoo :k:
DADDU
January 5, 2005, 10:10pm
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Sandleen is baar phir koshish kar lo shaaied kisi ko tum per reham aajaye aur vote tum ko bhi de day itna pareshaan kiyoun ho dost.
LaL mirchi jalati hai jalti nahi
Re: Poet of the Month (December)
Thanks alot everyone for appreciating.
and sorry Golden for late reply. I was out of contact with the world of computers for sometime.
once again thanks to all of you.
and Sandi
Lamhay
January 8, 2005, 1:42pm
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Bahut Bahut Mubarak Ho BM ! :)
Re: Poet of the Month (December)
congratz
Koyal
January 9, 2005, 3:08am
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nice gazal Bm Congratulation...kisi ka naseeb tu khula poetry main :p
Re: Poet of the Month (December)
thanks LamahY, Ghazal kisi ki and Koyal.
Jias
January 13, 2005, 10:04pm
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Congrats :k: Well done, keep it up.
system
January 24, 2005, 7:55pm
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Congratulations BM :-)
IS
January 25, 2005, 5:29am
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WOW bohat bohat Mubarak Hoo Hassan Bahi
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:k: