POEM needed

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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I need a poem urgently…an “I miss you” one.

dont ask why. first post some here and then I will explain later why.

:slight_smile:

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Have you ever bothered to realize
how much you mean to me?
I care so much for you inside
and miss you so deeply.

My mind is always curious about
the way things might have been.
As days go by and time goes by,
I look back once again.

All the time I held you in my arms,
I had the whole world right there.
There you were, comforting me with
all of your charms.

Every little kiss from you
was like a dream come true.
This love that I have inside my heart,
it all belonged to you!

It's funny, all those little things
I never thought I'd miss,
Like all those conversations we had,
or the first time we kissed.

I guess that what I'm trying to say,
is I miss and love you more each day!
It hurts me not to see you,
or not to know if you're ok.

I want you to understand
that I loved you from the start.
And I want you to know,
no matter how many miles
we may be apart,
you'll always hold a special place
in my heart.

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^ wow.....did u write that by urself???

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I miss you
You miss me
I miss parathas made with ghee
Now just give me some karahi lamb on the bone
Damn I miss ghar ka khaana so to home I'll phone

need som help
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thanks faizy :) that was great.

but can u give me something shorter that can fit in a text message?

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another proof of how “romantic” londoners are :rolleyes:

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Hahha! :rotfl: lol omg Maddy is the GS Poetry king :love: oo my hero :slight_smile: lol! :rotfl:

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omg impulse i’m writing a poem for class right now!! well, actually, it’s a sonnet. but it’s gotta rhyme and it’s got this whole format thingy i gotta follow. even like a set number of syllables!! :eek:. i’m better with the freestyle crap i post on gs :smooth:

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i need 3 poems...my 'own' work! but i hate poetry...n cant write poetry...i dont understand it..so would someone like to write me 3 poems...gotta be one theme tho...wut do u guys say?? they dont have to be too long...n they cant be too short...?

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Yea my teacher let's us use cuss words in our poetry and our stories that we right for class. That usually makes it a lot easier/funner. :D

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:smack: the teachers today :rolleyes:

if teachers are like this…wot can we expect of the kids :frowning:

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here is somethin i wrote earlier

http://www.paklinks.com/gs/showthread.php?t=181434
:)](http://www.paklinks.com/gs/showthread.php?t=181434)
and

http://www.paklinks.com/gs/showthread.php?t=181367
:)](http://www.paklinks.com/gs/showthread.php?t=181367)

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well phatima...since u can freestyle...would u like to help meeeeee..mine dont have to rhymee :p

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ohhhh i m a WANA BE lyricist tooo ..... but my flows go in-appropriate most of the time :S

Khala Churail .....
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naaahh I don’t freestyle :smack: lol I write pyaarai sai nursery rhymes :D..hahha.

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haha of courseee

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:slight_smile: Yea. I learn quite a lot at school. :hehe:

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it seems you havent seen the power of GOOGLE yet :p

may the google be with you :D

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^^ lol! haha :rotfl:

aight impulse check this out…this is what i’m using..

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just put simply in your text,

miss you, need you, want you, Love you....always :)