pochain gay apna haal teri be-basi say hum

chand_chehra · August 4, 2005, 6:56pm

ukta chukay hain kashmakash-e-zindagi say hum
thukra na dain jaha’n ko kahi bay-dili say hum

lo aj hum nay tor diya rishta-e-umeed
lo ab kabhi gila na karay gay kisi say hum

gar zindagi main mil gaye phir itefaaq say
pochain gay apna haal teri be-basi say hum

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 4, 2005, 7:07pm

Re: pochain gay apna haal teri be-basi say hum

boht achay!

Jaan_Lewaa · August 4, 2005, 7:21pm

Re: pochain gay apna haal teri be-basi say hum

khoob:k:

umer.ashraf · August 4, 2005, 7:37pm

Re: pochain gay apna haal teri be-basi say hum

Very nice,

perhaps poet is saying his words to the very same person Munir Niazi mentioned in one of his poems.

Kuch Shehar de log wi zaalum sunn
Kuch menoN merun da shauk wi si

show_sha · August 4, 2005, 9:15pm

Re: pochain gay apna haal teri be-basi say hum

wah!

High-Tech · August 5, 2005, 12:23am

Re: pochain gay apna haal teri be-basi say hum

itni sad poem
sona sad nai hotay

Dragon_King · August 5, 2005, 3:51am

Re: pochain gay apna haal teri be-basi say hum

:k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · August 6, 2005, 1:53am

Re: pochain gay apna haal teri be-basi say hum

:k:

Koyal · August 7, 2005, 2:52am

Re: pochain gay apna haal teri be-basi say hum

nice one chand g :)

Golden_Scorpion_1 · August 7, 2005, 3:49am

Re: pochain gay apna haal teri be-basi say hum

Beautiful.. Tnx for Sharing Chand

Amal · August 7, 2005, 2:18pm

Re: pochain gay apna haal teri be-basi say hum

Nice one CC...thanks for sharing :)

whizz · August 7, 2005, 2:28pm

Re: pochain gay apna haal teri be-basi say hum

bohut khoob:flower2:

khilat · August 7, 2005, 3:03pm

Re: pochain gay apna haal teri be-basi say hum

very nice