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Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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wo jab b saamnay aa jaey, usay paanay ko mann karta hai
na jaanay phir kyon khud ko hi samjhaanay ko mann karta hai

chupkay say sapnon mein aaey, jaagoon to ojhal ho jaaey
aesay halaat mein aksar hi so jaanay ko mann karta hai

kuch loag sada abaad rahein ye soch k ruk sa jaata hon
warna usko to door kahin lay jaanay ko mann karta hai

wo raat gaee, wo baat gaee jeevan ka khel tamaam hua
tum bin jeena kya jeena hai, mar jaanay ko mann karta hai

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zabardast hae aabla_paaji!
-1. zabardast ;)

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O thank U. :)
But u know zabardast isnt one of the options. Y dont u try 1,2 or 3.

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aabla_pa, achi poem hey :k: … Thanx for sharing it with us :slight_smile:

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Sir. :slight_smile:
Amnt I glad 2 c u.
Thanx 4 appreciation.

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hope u wont mind :)

i will go for ......2

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Asad saab nt fair sahi ho jao !
Go for 2 :slight_smile:
:k:

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i will say 2.

Time Pass …….
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nice :k:

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Nice .:k:

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Asad Sahab khairat tu he na........ Meri pasand ki poem upload ki he kya baat he.
This poem is above average..

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wow nice sharing ........

marriage and sects!