Please help me with the wedding invitation

**Can someone please read through this text, since I’ve never done this before. ***

Baraat:

                                                         In the Name of Allah, the Most Beneficent, the Most Merciful* 

Ms. xxxxx and Haji xxxxx

cordially request the honour of the presence of

……………………………………………………………………

on the auspicious occasion
of the wedding cerermony of the
beloved daughter and granddaughter

***xxxxx


to

xxxxx
son of Mr xxxxx & Mrs xxxxx

     On Saturday the xx September 2014 at 4.00 pm
 (Please take your seats at 4:30 pm)

Location:

                                                                                                          xxxxx                                    

Mehndi:

Join us
for the mehndi celebration of

xxxxx

On xxxxxx

Re: Please help me with the wedding invitation

'request the honour of the presence of'

Bad sentence structuring..

Re: Please help me with the wedding invitation

Formal wording:

mr. And mrs. X
request the honour of your presence
at the wedding ceremony of their granddaughter
bride's name
and
groom's name
son of mr. and mrs. Y
on the fifth of November, two- thousand and thirteen

at four o'clock in the afternoon

name of venue, city of venue

your guests' names go on the envelope, not on the invitation itself. The "please take your seats line" should not be included. These are directions you provide your guests once they arrive.

Re: Please help me with the wedding invitation

Mehendi:

You are cordially invited to join
Host names
for the mehendi celebration for
bride
and
groom
on Sunday, the 10th of November 2013
at five o'clock in the evening
at venue name