Piyar chupta nahe chupanai sai

Dania · December 4, 2003, 5:20pm

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Pooch Lo Tum Bhi Is Zamane Say,
Piyaar Chupta Nahin Chupane Say.

Paas Aatey Ho Choote Ho Baat Karte Ho,
Kabhi Matlab Say Kabhi Bahaaney Say.

Piyaar Dil Mein Hai To Lao Zubaan Pey,
Aag Badhti Hai Ye Bujhaaney Sey.

Tumhein Na Paana Shayad Behtar Hai,
Paa Ke Phir Se Tumhein Ganwaney Sey.

Chalo Ek Dua To Apni Poori Huiey,
Mil Liye Apne Ek Deewaaney Sey.

Roye Jatey Ho, Bas Roye Jatey Ho,
Kya Hoga Ye Dhan Lutaaney Sey.

Karo Koshish Ki Kurbatein Hi Rahein,
Dooriyan Badh Jaati Hain Badhaaney Sey.

Kya Sunaayein Kisi Ko Raaz-e-Dil,
Dard Bhi Badhta Hai Sunaaney Sey.

Bhool Jaao Kar Ke Achha Hai ‘Ayaz’,
Ehsaan Rehta Nahin Jataaney Sey.
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WiseGuy · December 4, 2003, 11:16pm

Nice poem and image 2.

Sohail_A · December 4, 2003, 11:21pm

:k:

p.s. larki achi hai :love:

Philanthrope · December 5, 2003, 5:24am

Wah!

Dania · December 5, 2003, 5:32am

CHURAIL bhi achi lagni lagee?

AQ · December 5, 2003, 5:43am

:k:

Azad · December 5, 2003, 6:51am

humm

Rohail_Ali · December 5, 2003, 11:31am

Dania_jii such a lovely poem :) so touching so soft n so loving :)

wesay aik mari taraf say app ke khidmat ma :)

Jab Paas Ho To Rukh Se ..!! NigaheiN Na Morna ....!!
Jab Dur Ho To Mera ..!! Tasavvur Na ChOrna ..!!
Aye Dost ..!! Dil Lagane Se Pehle Ye Sonch Le ..!!
Mushkil Bahut Hai ...!! RishtOOn Ki ZanjeeraiN HaiN Torna ...!!

Adab :)

Dania · December 5, 2003, 6:19pm

^
Thanks RA :)

Rohail_Ali · December 5, 2003, 8:49pm

nP D2 :)

Dilsay · December 6, 2003, 6:26am

Very nice...

Zakhmi_Umar · December 6, 2003, 10:12am

Re: Piyar chupta nahe chupanai sai

very good ghazal and pic too :love: :k: thanx for sharing

Aceones · December 6, 2003, 10:49am

Re: Piyar chupta nahe chupanai sai

awesome ghazal!
thnx for posting it up dania :k:

Dania · December 6, 2003, 6:55pm

Rohail_Ali · December 6, 2003, 11:33pm

ThiS iS 4 u D_2 cOz u had done a gr8 jOb in above poem sO read this One sure u would Love it .

bhari mehfil main tanha rehna acha lagta hai
terey barey main sochtey rehna acha lagta hai .

kabhi pholon main ,kabhi kaliyon main
tujh ko hi dhontey rehna acha lagta hai

meree zindagi ki khushiyan tumhee say hain wabasta
rab say sirf tumhein hi mangna acha lagta hai

hamarey darmiyan hail rahein sadiyon ki khamoshiyan
kuch is tarhan guftugu karna acha lagta hai

tumhrey baghir zindagi ka koi tasavur nahi hai
kuch is tarhan tumharee tamanna karna acha lagta hai

tum hi ko chaha,tum hi ko chahtey hain
tumhi ko chahtey rehna acha lagta hai

main cheen lon ga tumhein duniya ki rasmon say
k mujhye zamaney say baghawat karna acha lagta hai.

ba byz :)

cuteepie · December 7, 2003, 2:01am

beautiful :k:

smilly · December 7, 2003, 4:18pm

ah haan

thx for sharing guyss :k:

Capricorn · December 7, 2003, 4:42pm

Wah :k:

Diva · December 8, 2003, 2:09am

Wow :k: