Piya mein teri

ehsan · February 22, 2007, 2:52pm

Iss sharat pay khaloon gee pia tum say mein baazi
jeetongee toh tumhay paon haron gee toh mein teree

Fbi786 · February 22, 2007, 2:56pm

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Wah Wah Wah kia Shaaeri hai.

NikamiJano · February 22, 2007, 3:00pm

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how shweetttt

Mysterious_Woman · February 22, 2007, 3:44pm

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i've heard something similar, but its nice...

fara · February 22, 2007, 4:13pm

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**Iss shart pay khailooNgi piya piyar ki bazi

Jeeton tu Tumhain PaooN, HarooN tu Piya teri

Parveen Shakir
**

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · February 22, 2007, 4:58pm

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^^ Very nice:-)

_MuNiYa · February 22, 2007, 5:04pm

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[QUOTE]
Iss shart pay khailooNgi piya piyar ki bazi

Jeeton tu Tumhain PaooN, HarooN tu Piya teri

Parveen Shakir
[/QUOTE]

Lovely!

AQ · February 22, 2007, 5:09pm

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the first time I learnt this sher was in grade 10… from the urdu kee ustaani saahiba
we had many versions of it made by the friends group
NOT Appropriate for this forum:vivo:

fara · February 22, 2007, 5:32pm

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Its all good, bring it on!

Shab-e-Hijar · February 22, 2007, 5:36pm

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hain ap ki teacher ap ko asay shair sunati thi

ehsan · February 22, 2007, 5:44pm

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Thanks for the correction.

Shab-e-hijar aap ko nahin pata AQ kee teacher usay kiya kiya sikhatee thee. :D

AQ · February 22, 2007, 6:05pm

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kabhi woh sher sunna hai

Uljhaa jo paaouN yaar kaa zulf-e-daraaz maiN
Lo aap apnaY daam maiN saiiyaad aa gayaa

dekho acha hai kaY waqt saY pehla seekh jaao … kaheen dayr naa ho jaayee

AQ · February 22, 2007, 6:06pm

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aap mujhaY pakkaa pakkaa bann karwaao gee..

aap agent wagent tau naheeN ho koi

Shab-e-Hijar · February 22, 2007, 7:12pm

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paooun zule-e-daraaz mai … ye kasay hosakta hai:konfused:

AQ · February 22, 2007, 7:15pm

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waisaY tau lafz (bulkeY lafz-e-murrakkab) ‘zulf-e-daraaz’ hai laikin kher…

point of the matter is that baRay shehroN maiN aisaa hee hotaa hai.. kabhi woh naheeN sunnaa

Woh iss Shaan saY khelaa ishQ kee baazi
maiN apni jeet samajhtaa rahaa maat honaY tukk

Shab-e-Hijar · February 22, 2007, 7:18pm

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kabhi nahi lakin abhi sun liya

fara · February 22, 2007, 7:18pm

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Ehsan Bhai kay thread main flooding aap ker rahay hain… khair manayain… hum masoom poetry forums waloon ki itni jurrat kahan kay ‘Cafe’ kay ‘azeeem flooders’ say panga lain ya winki ‘jasoosi’ karain!

AQ · February 22, 2007, 7:21pm

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saaDay naal raho geY tau aish karo geY
achaY achaY sher yooN hee sunno geY

fara: you seem like a multinick

fara · February 22, 2007, 7:28pm

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**Waisay Ehsan bhai baat sirf yeh hay kay....

Yeh Bazzi Ishq Ki Bazzi Hay, Ju Chahoo Lagga Du Der Kaisa

Ger Jeet Gayee Tu Kiya Kehna, Harray Bhee Tu Bazzi Maat Nahi!
**

fara · February 22, 2007, 7:31pm

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**Wah wah… AQ Ankle itni orignial tay Eskilent adea aapki khoopri main kaisay aaya…?

**