Picture Poetry

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Friends, here is a picture for your imagination to work on. Post a sheir (no complete ghazal please) which could describe the scene to a tee.

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Raat bhi hey kuch bheegi bheegi
Chand bhi hey kuch madham madham
tum aao tou aankheiN kholein
soii huwii paayal ki chham chham

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***kia kahiN kesay basaR hijaR ki raa'taiN ki haiN*** ***umeR bhaR chand se ik shakas ki bataiN ki haiN*** :blush:
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^ aww that is too good.

bikharti hui gehraiyyan aik roshni ki
dikha rahi hayn raasta kuch jaagey hue andhairon ko

Sowwie, I just had to take a shot. :CareBear:

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Nikami ji kis ki baateiN ki heiN chaand sey:p

TanhayaaN very cool sher :-)

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chaa.Nd tanhaa hai aasmaa.N tanhaa
dil milaa hai kahaa.N kahaa.N tanhaa

bujh ga_ii aas chhup gayaa taaraa
thar_tharaataa rahaa dhuaa.N tanhaa

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N**ikamiJi **zabardast sheir hey, balke babbar-sheir hey :):k:

Gul aap ke sheir meiN garr’barr hey, hameiN to chaand kaheiN sey bhi “madham madham” nahi lag raha :slight_smile:

What happened with old Guppies
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:blush: chand se shaks ki :blush:

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dekh lain chand se shaks ne ini currage de k sheR babbar lion buN gaya :hehe:

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kuch is qadar jlaya ha tpta soraj na
ab tu chand ka necha b pyas lgti ha

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***dheeRay dheeRay chal chaand gagaN maiN*** ***kahiN dhal na jaa'ey raat toot na jaa'eiN sapnay***:blush:
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Maira dil ki raakh kuraidh mat Issay Muskuraa kay hawa na day

Yeh Charagh phir bhi Charaagh hay tayra haath kaheen jala na day

Zara daikh chand ki kirnoon nay bikhar bikhar kay tamaam shab

Tera naam likha hay rait par koi lahar ussay mitta na day

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nice asha'r everyone:)

could not find one for myself but it reminded me something from my own :P

Jo haiN hilaal-e-eid kay hus'n par mar miTnay waalay
mehtaab-e-mukammal say nafrat unhaiN hai

jo na mukammal hai, woh laaiq-e-muhabbat?
jo takmeel paa gayaa, aankh kaa shahteer wohi hai

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chaand ke saath kai dard puraane nikale
kitane gam the jo tere gam ke bahaane nikale

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beautiful sher Pk

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it's 4 baQra eid :p

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lagta hey meri nazar kamzor ho gai hey:hehe:

MAIN KYA KARUNNN?? :((((((((((((((((((((((
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chaa.Nd ke saath ka_ii dard puraane nikale
kitane Gam the jo tere Gam ke bahaane nikale

fasl-e gul aa_ii phir ik baar asiiraan-e-vafaa
apane hii Khuun ke dariyaa me.n nahaane nikale

hijr ki choT ajab sang-shikan hotii hai
dil kii befaiz zamiino.n se Khazaane nikale

umr guzarii hai shab-e-taar me.n aa.Nkhe.n malate
kis ufaq se meraa Khurshiid na jaane nikale

kuu-e-qaatil me.n chale jaise shahiido.n kaa juluus
Khvaab yuu.N bhiigatii aa.Nkho.n ko sajaane nikale

dil ne ik ii.nT se taamiir kiyaa taaj mahal
tuu ne ik baat kahii laakh fasaane nikale

dasht-e tanhaa_ii-e-hijraa.N me.n kha.Daa sochataa huu.N
haaye kyaa log meraa saath nibhaane nikale

mai.n ne ‘Amjad’ use bevaastaa dekhaa hii nahii.n
vo to Khushbuu me.n bhii aahaT ke bahaane nikale

Amjad Islam Amjad

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^ Bb Aymal ne german main ye b sath likha hia no complete gazal please :p
i guess me learning german it's not hard :p

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^^ :naraz:

Amal nay jo kaha wo tu i did on the picture… baqi tu wasay hi i posted caz aachi lugi! :bummer: