phir yun hua k dard mein shiddat nahi rahi,

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**Wo silsle wo shoq wo nisbat nahi rahi..

ab zindgi mein hijar ki vehshat nahi rahi.

toota hai jab se uski maseehayi ka tilsim,

dil ko kisi maseeha ki hajat nahi rahi

..****Phir yun hua k koi shanasa nahi rhai

,****phir yun hua k dard mein shiddat nahi rahi,

.******Phir yun hua k ho gya wo masroof bhi buhat,

,**phir hamain yad karnay ki usay fursat nhi rhi..
**
Ab kya kisi ko chahain k humko to in dino,

khud apne aap se b muhabat nahi rahi.****

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Re: phir yun hua k dard mein shiddat nahi rahi,

she'r kii soorat meN agar likhtiiN aap to paRhne meN qadre aasaanii hotii...

...Ghazal umda aur murass'a hai...kis shaa'ir kaa kalaam hai?

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Re: phir yun hua k dard mein shiddat nahi rahi,

shaair to nahi pata , albata shair k andaz main likh dia hai

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Re: phir yun hua k dard mein shiddat nahi rahi,


oh achchhaa...thank you! :)

btw, is Ghazal ke kuchh ash'aar shaayad typo kii vajah se Khaarij az bahr aur be-vazan ho gaye haiN...tasHeeH farmaa lijiiye, ai'n navaazish hogii.

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Re: phir yun hua k dard mein shiddat nahi rahi,

:lajawab:

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Re: phir yun hua k dard mein shiddat nahi rahi,

aap ne roman lines main bhi wazan dhoondna shroo kardia :hayaa:

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Re: phir yun hua k dard mein shiddat nahi rahi,

lol…abhii taul taul ke to nahiiN dekhaa par kuchh bhaarii kuchh halke zaroor lage! :smiley:

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Re: phir yun hua k dard mein shiddat nahi rahi,

:k: