***teRe qadmoN pe saR hogaa qazaa saR pe khaRi ho ghee
phiR us sajde kaa kyaa kahNaa anokhi bandgi ho ghee
***
*** nasiim-e-subah gulshaN meiN guloN se khelti ho ghee
kisi ki aa’khaRi hichki kisi ki dil-lagi ho ghee
*** dikha duuN’gaa sar-e-mahfil bata duuN’gaa sar-e-mahshaR
vo mere dil meiN hoon gaiN auR duniyaa dekhti ho ghee
*** mazaa aa jaayegaa mahshaR meiN phiR sunane-sunaane kaa
zubaaN ho gii vahaaN meRi kahaanii aap ki ho ghee
tumheiN daanistaa mahafil meiN jo dekhaa ho to mujrim hooN
nazar aaKhir nazar hai be-iraadaa uTh ga_ii ho ghee***
AQ
September 4, 2007, 10:10pm
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Re: phiR us sajde kaa kyaa kahNaa anokhi bandgi ho ghee
shaair kaa naam bataao gee tau paRhooN gaa
Re: phiR us sajde kaa kyaa kahNaa anokhi bandgi ho ghee
nice one jano g :k:
lakin ab kon asa karta bus kahnay ki batain
Re: phiR us sajde kaa kyaa kahNaa anokhi bandgi ho ghee
nahi batatti is dafa pata hia peR adat nahi likhnay ki
Re: phiR us sajde kaa kyaa kahNaa anokhi bandgi ho ghee
shaied kahnay se ya parnay se kisi pe asaR ho jaa’ey
Re: phiR us sajde kaa kyaa kahNaa anokhi bandgi ho ghee
shaied kahnay se ya parnay se kisi pe asaR ho jaa'ey :)
shaied :)
AQ
September 4, 2007, 10:17pm
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Re: phiR us sajde kaa kyaa kahNaa anokhi bandgi ho ghee
jhooT
K_Khan
September 4, 2007, 10:33pm
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Re: phiR us sajde kaa kyaa kahNaa anokhi bandgi ho ghee
Kaafii behKe hoe nazrain paeen hain shair nai..
Re: phiR us sajde kaa kyaa kahNaa anokhi bandgi ho ghee
^^ it seems true
Nice one
Re: phiR us sajde kaa kyaa kahNaa anokhi bandgi ho ghee
Awesome.. :)
Minerva
September 5, 2007, 6:42am
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its good but I don’t read such dukhi shairs anymore
Re: phiR us sajde kaa kyaa kahNaa anokhi bandgi ho ghee
oho Minevra g dukhi na huwo sher samj k par lo bus thanks any ways
SJ
September 5, 2007, 12:26pm
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nice ghazal …:k:
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Re: phiR us sajde kaa kyaa kahNaa anokhi bandgi ho ghee
gg ap k ghaR se ho k aa’ya tha na
Re: phiR us sajde kaa kyaa kahNaa anokhi bandgi ho ghee
Awesome.. :)
shukria :)
Re: phiR us sajde kaa kyaa kahNaa anokhi bandgi ho ghee
^^ it seems true
Nice one
Re: phiR us sajde kaa kyaa kahNaa anokhi bandgi ho ghee
***tumheiN daanistaa mahafil meiN jo dekhaa ho to mujrim hooN ***
***nazar aaKhir nazar hai be-iraadaa uTh ga_ii ho ghee***
Aisa Lagta Tou naheen hay Laykin ho bhi sakta hay :D
btw nice sharing :)
Re: phiR us sajde kaa kyaa kahNaa anokhi bandgi ho ghee
Re: phiR us sajde kaa kyaa kahNaa anokhi bandgi ho ghee
apke adteyn boht ache heyn