phir us k baad kitni dair taak maiN kuch nahi boli

[Koyal]

***maiN kahti teri chahat ki fiza maiN punkh bharooN kesay*** ***wo bola k bichri huwei koonj k tootey huwey par se***

maiN kahti thei samandar maiN khushi k kis tarha utrooN
kaha be-aa’b mahi ka sa paira’haN pahan dekho

maiN kahti thei chalo itna tu ho gha dard ki zanjeer tootey ghi
wo bola khawab-e-zeest ki teray taa’beer tootey ghi

maiN kahti thei tu kia ye tey hai k meray khawab jhoothey they
wo bola haaN yehi tey hai teray tumhaa’ray lufz jhoothey they

maiN kahti thei sara’bi hum they ya ye dunia he dhooka thei
wo bola baat hai itni tumhari payaa’s zaida thei

maiN kahti payaas asi hai k dar’yaa khud pukaa’ray gha
wo bola haar jaa’oo ghi suno waa’pis palat jaa’oo

maiN kahti thei meray baad tum tanhaa na rah jaa’oo
wo bola halqa-e-yaaraa’N bohat hai saath dainay ko

maiN kahti thei bohat mumkiN hai ye dukh jaaN lay jaa’ey
wo kahta tha tumhaiN kitna hai dukh maiN aazmaa’ooN gha

maiN kahti thei kaho itna kahaN taak aazmaa’oo gay’ay
wo bola bus wahaN taak , jab tum apni jaa’N se jaa’oo gay’ay

phir us k baad kitni dair taak maiN kuch nahi boli

[muddii]

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@Koyal

***maiN kahti teri chahat ki fiza maiN punkh bharooN kesay*** ***wo bola k bichri huwei koonj k tootey huwey par se***

maiN kahti thei samandar maiN khushi k kis tarha utrooN
kaha be-aa’b mahi ka sa paira’haN pahan dekho

maiN kahti thei chalo itna tu ho gha dard ki zanjeer tootey ghi
wo bola khawab-e-zeest ki teray taa’beer tootey ghi

maiN kahti thei tu kia ye tey hai k meray khawab jhoothey they
wo bola haaN yehi tey hai teray tumhaa’ray lufz jhoothey they

maiN kahti thei sara’bi hum they ya ye dunia he dhooka thei
wo bola baat hai itni tumhari payaa’s zaida thei

maiN kahti payaas asi hai k dar’yaa khud pukaa’ray gha
wo bola haar jaa’oo ghi suno waa’pis palat jaa’oo

maiN kahti thei meray baad tum tanhaa na rah jaa’oo
wo bola halqa-e-yaaraa’N bohat hai saath dainay ko

maiN kahti thei bohat mumkiN hai ye dukh jaaN lay jaa’ey
wo kahta tha tumhaiN kitna hai dukh maiN aazmaa’ooN gha

maiN kahti thei kaho itna kahaN taak aazmaa’oo gay’ay
wo bola bus wahaN taak , jab tum apni jaa’N se jaa’oo gay’ay

phir us k baad kitni dair taak maiN kuch nahi boli

Very touchy…n nice:)

P.S Uss kay baad boolnay ko raha he kiya…

[Shab-e-Hijar]

Re: phir us k baad kitni dair taak maiN kuch nahi boli

Beautifulll :k:

ab ye bhi bataye ye sub batain kis kay beach huwi??

[Sheal]

Re: phir us k baad kitni dair taak maiN kuch nahi boli

bohot khoobsoorat koyal :k:. really very nice and touchy.

PS: shuker hai is ka “The End” hoa

[muncho]

Re: phir us k baad kitni dair taak maiN kuch nahi boli

nice g

[hiba_no.1]

Re: phir us k baad kitni dair taak maiN kuch nahi boli

v nice

[Precious_Khan]

Re: phir us k baad kitni dair taak maiN kuch nahi boli

Buhat Aala :k:

The EnD :~)

[redidentity]

Re: phir us k baad kitni dair taak maiN kuch nahi boli

Awesome.. :k:

[Sheal]

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@Koyal

***maiN kahti teri chahat ki fiza maiN punkh bharooN kesay*** ***wo bola k bichri huwei koonj k tootey huwey par se***

maiN kahti thei samandar maiN khushi k kis tarha utrooN
kaha be-aa’b mahi ka sa paira’haN pahan dekho

maiN kahti thei chalo itna tu ho gha dard ki zanjeer tootey ghi
wo bola khawab-e-zeest ki teray taa’beer tootey ghi

maiN kahti thei tu kia ye tey hai k meray khawab jhoothey they
wo bola haaN yehi tey hai teray tumhaa’ray lufz jhoothey they

maiN kahti thei sara’bi hum they ya ye dunia he dhooka thei
wo bola baat hai itni tumhari payaa’s zaida thei

maiN kahti payaas asi hai k dar’yaa khud pukaa’ray gha
wo bola haar jaa’oo ghi suno waa’pis palat jaa’oo

maiN kahti thei meray baad tum tanhaa na rah jaa’oo
wo bola halqa-e-yaaraa’N bohat hai saath dainay ko

maiN kahti thei bohat mumkiN hai ye dukh jaaN lay jaa’ey
wo kahta tha tumhaiN kitna hai dukh maiN aazmaa’ooN gha

maiN kahti thei kaho itna kahaN taak aazmaa’oo gay’ay
wo bola bus wahaN taak , jab tum apni jaa’N se jaa’oo gay’ay

phir us k baad kitni dair taak maiN kuch nahi boli

is it a typo mistake…?
teray aay ga k tumharay…?

[Dushwari]

Re: phir us k baad kitni dair taak maiN kuch nahi boli

v. good poem. Sheal.
very nice poem, nice thoughts.
not all people are perceptive to its content in humble truth. the referrent has to be thinking on the same lines, but otherwise, it is foreign to the referrent.
in any event, it is one fine poem.

best,
Dushwari

[sunny_nicky]

Re: phir us k baad kitni dair taak maiN kuch nahi boli

nicee:)

[deadsoul]

Re: phir us k baad kitni dair taak maiN kuch nahi boli

zabardast
buhat he alaa hai

[Aryaan]

Re: phir us k baad kitni dair taak maiN kuch nahi boli

Bohat khoob Koyal...

[Koyal]

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@Sheal

is it a typo mistake…?

teray aay ga k tumharay…?

tumharay tha typing mistake itni lambi type kar kar k thanks for pointing out

[Azad]

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:k:

[bheegiyaad]

Re: phir us k baad kitni dair taak maiN kuch nahi boli

awesome sharing koyal :k:

[Sheal]

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@Koyal

tumharay tha typing mistake itni lambi type kar kar k thanks for pointing out

u r welcome
main bhi urdu main type ker rahi thi to pata chala

[moonmine]

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Beautifulll sharing....

[padfoot]

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maiN kahti thei meray baad tum tanhaa na rah jaa’oo
wo bola halqa-e-yaaraa’N bohat hai saath dainay ko

Very nice and touchy sharing, its great :k: Thanx!***

[muddii]

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@Sheal

is it a typo mistake....?

teray aay ga k tumharay..........?

I think it is Saray Tumhary Lafz Jhootay Thay........