phir theher gai palkoN pe nami,phir dil ne kaha hai teri kami

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

bholibisri November 17, 2007, 4:18am 1

phir chand khila holay holay phir raat thami dheeray dheeray

***phir dil ne kaha hai teri kami

phir yaad k jugnu mehak gaye
pir pagal armaan behak gaye
phir jannat si lagti hai zameen

***phir dil ne kaha hai teri kami

phir guzre lamhon ki baatein
phir jagi jagi si raatein
phir theher gai palkoN pe nami

***phir dil ne kaha hai teri kami ***

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redidentity November 17, 2007, 4:46am 2

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beautiful :)

Ali_2 November 17, 2007, 5:31am 3

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buhat khoob :k:

Shab-e-Hijar November 17, 2007, 5:40am 4

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Nice :k:

Starlight November 17, 2007, 5:54am 5

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dil ne kaha tere kami..sigh of pain

sunny_nicky November 17, 2007, 9:44pm 6

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buhat alaa

bholibisri November 18, 2007, 7:25pm 7

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:)

Sheal November 18, 2007, 7:52pm 8

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its beautiful :k:

bholibisri November 19, 2007, 1:56am 9

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thanks sheal

bholibisri November 19, 2007, 1:57am 10

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pain killer chaiey :p

Dushwari November 19, 2007, 1:57am 11

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sounds wonderfully true.
thanks for sharing.

best,

Dushwari

Aryaan November 19, 2007, 4:41am 12

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Bohat khoob Bholibisri...

Daanie November 19, 2007, 6:45am 13

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buhut khoob :)

arsalanh2000 November 20, 2007, 11:02am 14

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Very Nice

Koyal November 26, 2007, 1:34am 15

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nice one bholi :)

Azad November 26, 2007, 5:34am 16

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khoob :k:

Jhanjharewali November 26, 2007, 1:54pm 17

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*Janoji aap toh hamesha too good hi laati hein *;)

bholibisri November 27, 2007, 3:46am 18

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:halo: zinda haiN abhi

bholibisri November 27, 2007, 3:46am 19

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:halo:

!! Mera Jee Chahta Hai !!

Sannan November 27, 2007, 3:51am 20

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Buhat Munfirad Nazam .......... shabash