phir saavan rut kii pavan chalii tum yaad aaye

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 27, 2004, 3:16am

phir saavan rut kii pavan chalii tum yaad aaye phir patton kii paazeb bajii tum yaad aaye

phir kuNjen bolin ghas ke hare samandar mein
rut aaii piile phuulon kii tum yaad aaye

phir kaagaa bolaa ghar ke suune aaNgan mein
phir amrat ras kii buuNd paDii tum yaad aaye

pahale to main chiiKh ke royaa aur phir haNsane lagaa
baadal garjaa bijalii chamakii tum yaad aaye

din bhar to main duniya ke dhandhon mein khoya raha
jab diivaaron se dhuup Dhalii tum yaad aaye

Dilsay · March 27, 2004, 2:31pm

Hamain tu wo har rut main yaat atay hain...

:)

ASA · March 27, 2004, 5:10pm

din bhar to main duniya ke dhandhon mein khoya raha
jab diivaaron se dhuup Dhalii tum yaad aaye

hmmmm mere baat ho rahi hai naaa???

i know mere nahi ho rahi …

~ hum woh seyaaH naseeb hai amjad k sheher maiN

waise .. Very nice… :k::k:

Amarbail · March 27, 2004, 5:49pm

Awesome piece …:k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 28, 2004, 2:17am

Dilsay

AsSweetAs kis na kaha k apke baat hor ahe hai:halo:
per thanx for liking…

~hum woh seyaaH naseeb hai amjad k sheher maiN

nice:k:

GKK_s_friend · March 28, 2004, 3:26am

keep it up:hula:

cuteepie · March 28, 2004, 5:15am

:k:

BoReD_iN_BrIsBaNe · March 28, 2004, 6:23am

:k:

Azad · March 28, 2004, 7:41pm

humm

Zakhmi_Umar · March 29, 2004, 9:52am

Re: phir saavan rut kii pavan chalii tum yaad aaye

Buhat khoob :k:

thanx for sharing

Daagh · March 29, 2004, 10:46am

Re: phir saavan rut kii pavan chalii tum yaad aaye

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *

phir saavan rut kii pavan chalii tum yaad aaye
phir patton kii paazeb bajii tum yaad aaye

phir kuNjen bolin ghas ke hare samandar mein
rut aaii piile phuulon kii tum yaad aaye

phir kaagaa bolaa ghar ke suune aaNgan mein
phir amrat ras kii buuNd paDii tum yaad aaye

pahale to main chiiKh ke royaa aur phir haNsane lagaa
baadal garjaa bijalii chamakii tum yaad aaye

din bhar to main duniya ke dhandhon mein khoya raha
jab diivaaron se dhuup Dhalii tum yaad aaye

[/QUOTE]

very beautiful...i have it sung by Ghulam Ali Saab and it sounds very very beautiful

WiseGuy · March 29, 2004, 2:16pm

Nice!

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 31, 2004, 5:35am

thanx everyone

Man_of_Courage · March 31, 2004, 8:41am

GKK,

When I come to POETRY forum and sees you have posted a new thread, I become happy thinking that your collection of potry always reflects the ahsaasaat of my dil !!!

Thanks for your posts...

ghazal_kisi_ke · April 1, 2004, 3:48am

thanx a lot for ur words… my pleasure…

Azad · April 1, 2004, 7:11am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Man of Courage: *
GKK,

When I come to POETRY forum and sees you have posted a new thread, I become happy thinking that your collection of potry always reflects the ahsaasaat of my dil !!!

Thanks for your posts...
[/QUOTE]

O

MANAN · April 3, 2004, 10:10am

:k::k:

system · April 5, 2004, 2:54pm

Seedha_Saada · April 5, 2004, 3:49pm

Nice :)

Rukhsarbibi · April 7, 2004, 9:43pm

Don't know why but I love this line:

[quote]
phir patton kii paazeb bajii tum yaad aaye
[/quote]

Nayyara Noor sings it beautifully :)