phiR lab-e-sahil gharaunda kaR gayaa tameeR kauN

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

NikamiJano February 19, 2006, 4:03pm 1

***paa-ba-gil sab haiN rihaa_ii ki kaRe tadabeeR kauN ***
***dast-bastaa shahar meiN khole meRi zanjeeR kauN ***

***meRaa sar haaziR hai lekiN meRaa munsif dekh le ***
***kaR rahaa hai mere fard-e-juRm ki tahReer kauN ***

aaj darvaazooN pe dastak jaani pahchaani si hai
aaj mere naam laataa hai meri taazeeR kauN

***neend jab KhvaaboN se pyaaRii ho to aise ahad meiN ***
***Khvaab dekhe kauN aur KhvaabooN ko de taabeeR kauN ***

***reit abhi pichale makaan’N ki na vaapas aa_ii thi ***
***phiR lab-e-saahil gharaunda kaR gayaa taameeR kauN ***

***saare rishte hijratooN meiN saath dete haiN to phiR ***
***shahaR se jaate hue hotaa hai daaman_geeR kauN ***

***dushmanoo k saath mere dost bhii aazaad haiN ***
***dekhnaa hai khe’Nchta hai mujh pe pahalaa teeR kauN ***

Amal February 19, 2006, 4:15pm 2

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Wah NikamiJi, zabardast ghazal hey…share karney ke leeye shukriya k:

Shab-e-Hijar February 20, 2006, 8:33pm 3

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woww jano gi bohat khoob :)

chand_chehra February 21, 2006, 6:50am 4

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saare rishte hijratooN meiN saath dete haiN to phiR
shahaR se jaate hue hotaa hai daaman_geeR kauN

very nice :k:

NikamiJano February 24, 2006, 11:32pm 5

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thanks Aymal:)

NikamiJano February 24, 2006, 11:33pm 6

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shukria shab:)

Tair-e-Lahoti

NikamiJano February 24, 2006, 11:33pm 7

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shukria chandoo g:)

Pakeeza February 25, 2006, 9:01pm 8

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Zabardast Posting Nikami ji:-)

IS February 25, 2006, 10:14pm 9

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bohat khooooooooooooob

Capricorn February 26, 2006, 4:02pm 10

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Mein kheenchoon?
By the way, teer maarne ke baad bataoonga ke dost hoon ya dushman

NikamiJano February 26, 2006, 9:52pm 11

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KIA CAPO

wo pata hia k APP kia ho

NikamiJano February 26, 2006, 9:53pm 12

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thanks inocent:)

NikamiJano February 26, 2006, 9:53pm 13

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zabardast shukria Pakeeza:)

Capricorn February 27, 2006, 3:51pm 14

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Baree hushiyaar ho gayee ho aap

NikamiJano March 3, 2006, 3:41am 15

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suhbat ka asar hai

Bholay_Bisray March 3, 2006, 1:08pm 16

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Nice One NJ

dil ke sun_saan jaziiro.n kii Khabar laayegaa
dard pahaluu se judaa ho ke kahaa.N jaayegaa
vaqt Khaamosh hai ruuThe hue yaaro.n kii tarah
kaun lau dete hue zaKhmo.n ko sahalaayegaa

_Miss_Meh March 4, 2006, 8:58pm 17

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**reit abhi pichale makaan'N ki na vaapas aa_ii thi
phiR lab-e-saahil gharaunda kaR gayaa taameeR kauN **

  wonderful ...very nice

ullujii March 5, 2006, 3:36am 18

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nice poem. lakin urdu mushkil hai :P

Koyal March 5, 2006, 3:46am 19

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kia ENGlish mediam hain ap k punjabi mediam

HeArT_HaCKeR March 5, 2006, 10:54am 20

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Nice one nikammi..