phir aik din hawa ne kaha maiN tu thaak gaa'ee

Koyal · September 9, 2003, 1:19am

*

phir aik din hawa ne kaha maiN tu thaak gaa’ee
khushboo ka bhooj meri kamar ko jhuka gay’aa

thehroo k aa’eeno maiN abi gard hai jami
seenooN ka sara zahar nighaahooN maiN a gay’aa

kartey ho intzaar aa’bus itna jaaN lo
loatey gha ab tu shaam he ko subha ka gay’aa

likhay gha koN shaam k maathey pe tera naam
suraj tu tera naam bhujaa k chala gay’aa*

ullujii · September 9, 2003, 1:21am

zabardast :k:

WiseGuy · September 9, 2003, 5:11am

Niceeeeeeeee.....

Amal · September 9, 2003, 12:43pm

Re: phir aik din hawa ne kaha maiN tu thaak gaa’ee

Lovely ghazal Koyal:k:…thanx for sharing:)

Daagh · September 9, 2003, 3:19pm

beautiful koyal jee

thanks

system · September 9, 2003, 5:55pm

likhay gha koN shaam k maathey pe tera naam
suraj tu tera naam bhujaa k chala gay’aa

Beautiful, bohat hi achi hai.. :k::k::k:

Lamhay · September 9, 2003, 5:59pm

bahut khoob! Koyal

chodhry · September 9, 2003, 6:35pm

Re: phir aik din hawa ne kaha maiN tu thaak gaa’ee

nice one…:k:

tu nay acha nahien kia suraj

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 9, 2003, 7:10pm

boht achay koyal :)

chand_chehra · September 9, 2003, 8:23pm

very nice :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · September 10, 2003, 4:16am

wah bohut khoob:k:
koyal keep it up and thanx!

Koyal · September 10, 2003, 9:38pm

thanks

Koyal · September 10, 2003, 9:39pm

thanks WG..choudry...HH...VV..Lamhay....:)

Koyal · September 10, 2003, 9:40pm

wo tu hei he bus thora kali kali hia

Koyal · September 10, 2003, 9:41pm

very thanks chand g ..

Koyal · September 10, 2003, 9:42pm

Re: Re: phir aik din hawa ne kaha maiN tu thaak gaa’ee

Daagh · September 10, 2003, 9:58pm

kaale ho to kya hua dilwale ho

Koyal · September 10, 2003, 10:00pm

wohi tu nahi hia na 2 defects hainaik tu kali aur aik begaier dil wali

Prince_Ali · September 11, 2003, 6:58pm

:k: