Phele baar

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Muslim_Queen August 18, 2003, 12:15am 1

Phele baar usne dosti ka haath kiya

Humne kabool kiya

Dusree baar pyaar ka izhaar kiya

Humne woh bhi kabool kiya

Phir usne thoda dard diya

Aur woh bhi humne dil mein chupa liya

Karte karte dard itna diya

Ke dil toot gaya… aur hum ne ro diya.

XChorniX August 18, 2003, 12:58am 2

hmph

very nice yara :)

cuteepie August 18, 2003, 1:54am 3

:)

Azad August 18, 2003, 5:57am 4

Good to be a Queen

Muslim_Queen August 18, 2003, 4:58pm 5

.

Wase thank you sub ka.

system August 18, 2003, 6:51pm 6

ahaan, nice :)

Amarbail1 August 18, 2003, 7:11pm 7

Awesome …:k:

Muslim_Queen August 18, 2003, 7:50pm 8

ty vivo and amarbail.

ghazal_kisi_ke August 18, 2003, 10:43pm 9

nice:k:

Muslim_Queen August 19, 2003, 2:35pm 10

ty jaanu.

K_Khan August 19, 2003, 2:43pm 11

nice 1 :k:

Muslim_Queen August 19, 2003, 3:40pm 12

ty.