Per Tu

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 16, 2003, 7:29pm

jub bhee dekha hai usay dil ne ye mehsoos kia
jaisay mere sehr-o-shaam ka mehver hai yehi
meri takhiyul k azar ne tarasha hai jisse
mere khwab-on ka wo be-naam paikar hai yehi

koi khulwat ho k julwat wo kissi bazm mein ho
mujh ko hur rang mein dildaar nazr ayee hai
koi aalam ho, koi haal ho mera lekin
wo mujhe meri talb-gaar nazr aayee hai

us ki ankhoon ki wo masoom se dazedah chamk
kitne na-gufta fasano ki hai tamheed na poch
us k gulrang laboon ka wo tabas-sum wo hijaab
kis tamanna ki hai be-sakhta taeed na poch

us k andaaz-e-takullum ki wo mohtaat rawish
kis nawazish ki hai ghamaz koi kia janay
pass reh ker bhee wo duur rehne ki ada
kis rafaQat hai hai aaghaaz koi kia janay

itna manoosh hai us ka hur ik andaaz k dil
us ki hur ik baat ka afsana bana laita hai
us k tarshay hoay paiker se chura kur kuch rang
apne khwabon ka sanm khana saja laita hai

jane is haseen tasav-ver ki haQeeQat kia hai
janay un khwaboon ki Qismat mein sehr hai k nahi
Jane wo koin hai mae ne usay samjha kia hai
janay us ko bhee mere dil ki khabr hai k nahi

kahein aisa tu nahi k wo haseen dil-daar
mere takhiyul k per tu k siwa kuch bhee na ho
iztiraab aur sakoon ki ye kash-makash ye sataiz
khud fareebi ki tag-o-du k siwa kuch bhee na ho

hamayat Ali

i love this ghazal… jub bhee parhti hoon tu ajeeb sa mehsoos kerti hoon… its so lovely :k: umed hai ap sub bhee perh ker khoob lutf-andooz hon ge.. :~)

Swera · August 16, 2003, 7:48pm

I love it,too..

Bohat achi hay...

jub bhee dekha hai usay dil ne ye mehsoos kia
jaisay mere sehr-o-shaam ka mehver hai yehi

Wah!

Amarbail1 · August 16, 2003, 7:54pm

Nice …:k:

ASA · August 16, 2003, 8:03pm

wah… bouhat he khoob… :k:

baziger · August 16, 2003, 8:23pm

**us k andaaz-e-takullum ki wo mohtaat rawish
kis nawazish ki hai ghamaz koi kia janay…

kahein aisa tu nahi k wo haseen dil-daar
mere takhiyul k per tu k siwa kuch bhee na ho
iztiraab aur sakoon ki ye kash-makash ye sataiz
khud fareebi ki tag-o-du k siwa kuch bhee na ho**

wah wah … bhut he khoob..bhut khoob:k:

TajMahal · August 17, 2003, 6:57am

wah bahut khoob!

system · August 17, 2003, 12:49pm

zabardast :k::k:

Azad · August 17, 2003, 1:08pm

mere takhiyul k per tu k siwa kuch bhee na ho

Wah :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 17, 2003, 3:21pm

thanks all for liking :~)

Azad · August 18, 2003, 7:01am

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*Originally posted by HeArT HaCKeR: *
thanks all for liking :~)
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liking what?

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 18, 2003, 1:13pm

for liking this ghazal

aQal-bund

SuraJ · August 18, 2003, 1:40pm

aik aik lafz apna aik khichaoo rakhta hai… alfaz ki mala bahut achi buni gai Doctor sahib aap ki pasand ki main kia bata kahon bahut Umda !

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 18, 2003, 1:45pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by SuraJ: *

aik aik lafz apna aik khichaoo rakhta hai........ alfaz ki mala bahut achi buni gai Doctor sahib aap ki pasand ki main kia bata kahon bahut Umda !
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thx for liking Suraj :~)

Azad · August 18, 2003, 1:50pm

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*Originally posted by HeArT HaCKeR: *

thx for liking Suraj :~)
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huh ... bhala kiyon like karnay lagay hum... dilchussp baat yeh hay aap ka oor AsweetA ka zooq kafi milta julta hay

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 18, 2003, 2:15pm

kia kerne lagay ap???

ap ki batein mere sur k oper se guzarti hain

aur ye tu mere liye khushi ki baat hai k mera aur AsSweetAs ka shoouq + zooq milta julta hai

Azad · August 18, 2003, 2:23pm

sara shoouq hi shoouq hay … zoq to kahain bhi nazar nahi aa raha

ghazal_kisi_ke · August 18, 2003, 10:07pm

awesome:k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 19, 2003, 2:54pm

aylo… khud pehle likha tha zouq ab kehte hain sara shouq hai

GKK thx for liking sis