Geele suraj pe nam zameen soey
zakhm jage to gham kaheen soey
tum bhi jeevan ko jaag ker kato
hum bhi sara janam nahe soey
raat bhar main jahan jahan jaga
teri zulfon ke kham waheen soey
jism soya hua hai barson se
per tere baad hum nahe soey!
Geele suraj pe nam zameen soey
zakhm jage to gham kaheen soey
tum bhi jeevan ko jaag ker kato
hum bhi sara janam nahe soey
raat bhar main jahan jahan jaga
teri zulfon ke kham waheen soey
jism soya hua hai barson se
per tere baad hum nahe soey!
Re: per tere baad hum nahe soey....
bahut aala
Nice :-)
Its been ages i've posted anything at Gs and specially in the poetry forum.... nice to be back :-)
Re: per tere baad hum nahe soey....
Bohat khoob..
Re: per tere baad hum nahe soey....
Khatmal hongay shayad bed main... tyfone ka spray karna chahyay tha na :s
achi poem hay,
bahut aala
Nice
Bohat Khoob
thanks for sharing and WB :-)
Re: per tere baad hum nahe soey....
buhut khoob :)
Re: per tere baad hum nahe soey…
nice :k:
Re: per tere baad hum nahe soey....
jism soya hua hai barson se
per tere baad hum nahe soey!
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Bohat khoob **Kashish*...
Khatmal hongay shayad bed main... tyfone ka spray karna chahyay tha na :s
achi poem hay,
bahut aala Nice Bohat Khoob
thanks for sharing and WB :-)
:-) bohat achi tashreeh ki aap ne btw poem nahe ghazal hai.... and thanx for the warm welcome.
shukria aap sab logo ki pasandeedgi ka ![]()
**achi poem hay, **
bahut aala Nice Bohat Khoob
thanks for sharing and WB :-)
i guess u have lecture about those word :p
PS: nice sharing kashish
Re: per tere baad hum nahe soey....
Nice one Kashish