pehli apni dil ki raza jaan jae e

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

muslima_1 February 9, 2006, 8:47pm 1

pehle to apne dil kii razaa jaan jaa_iye
phir jo nigaah-e-yaar kahe maan jaa_iye

pehlle mizaaj-e-raahaguzar jaan jaa_iye
phir gard-e-raah jo bhii kahe maan jaa_iye

kuchh kah rahii hai aap ke siine kii dha.Dakane
merii sune.n to dil kaa kahaa maan jaa_iye

ik dhuup sii jamii hai nigaaho.n ke aas paas
ye aap hai.n to aap pe qurbaan jaa_iye
shaayad huzuur se ko_ii nisbat hame.n bhii ho
aa.Nkho.n me.n jhaa.Nk kar hame.n pahachaan jaa_iye

by Qatil Shifai

IS February 9, 2006, 8:52pm 2

Re: pehli apni dil ki raza jaan jae e

NIce Sis :)

muslima_1 February 9, 2006, 9:07pm 3

Re: pehli apni dil ki raza jaan jae e

thank u
u have a understanding of poetry otherwise it wouldn't be nice

IS February 9, 2006, 9:39pm 4

Re: pehli apni dil ki raza jaan jae e

^ welcome Sis :)
and thanks :)

muslima_1 February 9, 2006, 9:55pm 5

Re: pehli apni dil ki raza jaan jae e

ur welcome like always

IS February 9, 2006, 10:30pm 6

Re: pehli apni dil ki raza jaan jae e

:)

ASA February 10, 2006, 3:41am 7

Re: pehli apni dil ki raza jaan jae e

**kuchh kah rahii hai aap ke siine kii dha.Dakane
merii sune.n to dil kaa kahaa maan jaa_iye **

bouhat achay one of my fav… :k:

gujmon February 10, 2006, 7:40am 8

Re: pehli apni dil ki raza jaan jae e

Excelent Muslima Zabardast

My Aim

muslima_1 February 11, 2006, 10:14pm 9

Re: pehli apni dil ki raza jaan jae e

Thanks ASA and Gujmon **
**but all the credit really goes to the poet we can just read and appreciate and try to learn.