patjhar ki khunk hawaon maen
girtey pattown ko
baddaltay mosamown say
poochna ho ga
ub kay barras iss shehar-e-na,pursaan maen
aur kis kis kay muqadder maen
toottna hoga
chaand chehrey
na-meherbaan mosammown ko khiraaj daetay daetay
janney kab zard huwway
dhalti shaam kay ghanney saaey maen
jeewan punkh pakkherown ko
ubb ghar louttna ho ga
na-janey ubb kay barras
iss shereh-e-na, pursaan maen
aur kis kis kay muqadar maen
zindagi ka roothna ho ga
girtey patton ko to babar
bus ubb tootna hi ho ga
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Re: PatJhaar
nice effort :k:
Re: PatJhaar
awesome :k:
Re: PatJhaar
patjhar ki khunk hawaon maen girtey pattown ko baddaltay mosamown say poochna ho ga ub kay barras iss shehar-e-na,pursaan maen aur kis kis kay muqadder maen toottna hoga chaand chehrey na-meherbaan mosammown ko khiraaj daetay daetay janney kab zard huwway dhalti shaam kay ghanney saaey maen jeewan punkh pakkherown ko ubb ghar louttna ho ga na-janey ubb kay barras iss shereh-e-na, pursaan maen aur kis kis kay muqadar maen zindagi ka roothna ho ga girtey patton ko to babar bus ubb tootna hi ho ga
I absolutely love it. Please share more of your work.
Re: PatJhaar
thanks for all who liked my attempt.
Re: PatJhaar
Waaaaaaaahhhh,,,simply amazing..
Re: PatJhaar
thank u ,bheegi yaad ,eemaan,asif2000,chacha _ghalib