~patherr mujhe kehta hai mera chahne wala..~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

HeArT_HaCKeR February 7, 2005, 4:02pm 1

ankho`N mien raha dil mein uter ker nahi dekha kashtii k musafirr na samander nahi dekha

be-waQt agr jaoun ga sub choonk parien ge
ik umerr hoee din mein kabhii gharr nahi dekha

jis din se chala hoon merii manzil pe nazR haii
aankho`N ne kabhii meel ka pather nahi dekha

ye phool mujhe koii virasat mien milay hien
tum ne mera kaanto`N bhara bisterr nahi dekha

pather mujhe kehta hai mera chahne wala
mae moom hoon us ne mujhe cho` ker nahi dekha
*

**~Bashir BadR~ **

Amarbail February 7, 2005, 6:50pm 2

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ye phool mujhe koii virasat mien milay hien
tum ne mera kaanto`N bhara bisterr nahi dekha …

Bahut khoob …:k:
Thanks for sharing HeArT HaCKeR

HeArT_HaCKeR February 7, 2005, 7:02pm 3

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thanks for likin Arif bhaii :)

Aryaan February 7, 2005, 7:59pm 4

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Bohat khoob HeArT HaCKeR…:k:

Golden_Scorpion February 8, 2005, 8:13am 5

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Wonderful Poem… Buhut zabardast…

Although Few days back.. I have read it somewhere.. BUT… same RAM probs… Yaad naheeN

BTW.. HO kahaaN…

HeArT_HaCKeR February 8, 2005, 9:20am 6

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Thanks Aryaan

GS bhaii: badaam khaya kerien ... ;)

mae ab wapas Qatar wapas aa gayee ho.. jabhi tu kul se GS per bethii rahii :D

system February 8, 2005, 2:30pm 7

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HH.. wonderful piece of poetry... :-)

HeArT_HaCKeR February 8, 2005, 4:22pm 8

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thanks KN flower

Amal February 8, 2005, 8:01pm 9

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Bohat hi khoobsoorat ghazal hey. Thanx for sharing HeArT HaCKeR :~)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh February 8, 2005, 10:43pm 10

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behad achi ghazal hay HH ,thanks for posting:-)

Golden_Scorpion_1 February 9, 2005, 4:29am 11

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HH Sweety… Badaam yahaan Buhut Expenssive hiaN

How was the TOUR.. Enjoy kia na..

HeArT_HaCKeR February 9, 2005, 11:15am 12

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Amal and Gul-e-tasbeeh.. pasand kerne ka shukriya : )

GS bhaii: mae bejh doun thoray se?

hmm trip was ok.. bboht sardii thee pindi mein

Golden_Scorpion_1 February 10, 2005, 7:18am 13

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ThoRay se kaam naheeN chalayga… Coz.. Zyada Prob hay

Sardi maiN Sardi hi hoti hay

_Miss_Meh February 10, 2005, 10:41am 14

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wonderful HH:)....thnx for sharin :)

kaun hai

HeArT_HaCKeR February 10, 2005, 11:20am 15

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thankyou miss meh

GS bhaii: ok ziada bejh douun gii

lekin Qatar mein tu kabhii sardiyon mein bhee itnii sardii nahi parii

koiDost February 10, 2005, 8:15pm 16

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Bahut Khoob HH Jee :k:
thanx for sharing

reet February 12, 2005, 10:55am 17

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ankho`N mien raha dil mein uter ker nahi dekha
kashtii k musafirr na samander nahi dekha

nice....