of Iqbal’s verses
Original:
aa gya ain larai meiN agar waqt-e-namaaz
qibla ro ho key zameiN boos hoi qoum-e-hijaz
aik hi saf meiN kharey ho gaye mehmood-o-ayaz
na koi banda raha aur na koi banda nawaz
Parody:
aa gya ain larai meiN agar waqt-e-namaaz
aik hi saf meiN kharey ho gaye mehmood-o-ayaaz
ooper sey aa gaye dushman key jehaaz
na koi banda raha aur na koi banda nawaz
Re: Parody
it is actually inserting only one line, little up and down of a single line, and removing one and you have a good parody ready...
similarly, Iqbal's one misra can be combined to the other of anyother sher and you can have a parody of it's own... One more reason I admire Iqbal a lot :-)
e.g. (as noted by Mr Fraudia couple of times)
Barq Girti hai tau baY chaaraY musalmaanoN par
Naa Tooraani rahai baaqi, naa iraani naa Afghani
PS: Perfect thread for poetry forum Icono Bhai :biggthumb
Re: Parody
hmmmm,,,,,,,,,
Re: Parody
Re: Parody
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Salam Bros,
We are making fun of all those brave and God fearing people who fought in the way of Islam. But I must admit your parody seems to point out the thinking of the current muslim Umah.
Regards,
Frozen