par phir bhi meri aaNkhoN meiN tera khaab paley to kya ho ga!

[Koyal]

***tera naam hi aaya tha lab par ke saari khalqat cheekh utthi ***
***tera haath pakar kar sarkoN par terey saath chaley to kya ho ga! ***

***yahaN har koi mujh se kehta hai tujhey hargiz bhi na sochooN meiN ***
***par phir bhi meri aaNkhoN meiN tera khaab paley to kya ho ga! ***

[Muslim_girl_1]

Re: par phir bhi meri aaNkhoN meiN tera khaab paley to kya ho ga!

simply beautiful…:k:

[HeArT_HaCKeR]

Re: par phir bhi meri aaNkhoN meiN tera khaab paley to kya ho ga!

thumbs up again for Amal.why dint you post the full ghazal? anywayz, thx for sharing :).

[Shab-e-Hijar]

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@Koyal

***tera naam hi aaya tha lab par ke saari khalqat cheekh utthi ***
***tera haath pakar kar sarkoN par terey saath chaley to kya ho ga! ***

***yahaN har koi mujh se kehta hai tujhey hargiz bhi na sochooN meiN ***
***par phir bhi meri aaNkhoN meiN tera khaab paley to kya ho ga! ***

qyamat hogi
nice shair

amal nay ya ap nay pahly post kya huwa ye …rite???

[Daanie]

Re: par phir bhi meri aaNkhoN meiN tera khaab paley to kya ho ga!

buhut khoobsurat :)

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

Re: par phir bhi meri aaNkhoN meiN tera khaab paley to kya ho ga!

would like to read the full ghazal again =)

[Koyal]

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@ghazal kisi ke

would like to read the full ghazal again =)

*** Ye chaand agar kabhi taaroN sey kisi roz larrey to kya ho ga! kisi roz yuNhi zid meiN aa kar na raat dhaley to kya ho ga!

tera naam hi aaya tha lab par ke saari khalqat cheekh utthi
tera haath pakar kar sarkoN par terey saath chaley to kya ho ga!

yahaN har koi mujh sey kehta hey tujhey hargiz bhi na sochooN meiN
par phir bhi meri aaNkhoN meiN tera khaab paley to kya ho ga!

teri chaahat ki saari shammeiN meiN ney ik ik kar ke bujha di heiN
gar phir bhi dil ke dareechoN par koi deep jaley to kya ho ga

terey saamney be’khud ho jaooN yehi soch ke meiN to darta hooN
koi aesa lamha paagal sa aa kar na taley to kya ho ga!

meiN aksar sochney lagta hooN aakhaast ki neeli basti meiN
tera taara merey taarey sey agar aan miley to kya ho ga! ***

yr lejiey full one ap k be-haad israar per aur btw Koyal ne post ki thei Nikami ne nahi:hoonh: :halo:

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

Re: par phir bhi meri aaNkhoN meiN tera khaab paley to kya ho ga!

^ i dunno why but i always think ‘koyal’ n ‘nikamijano’ are one person. maybe the way you girls write my mistake =\ sorry. and thank you for the ghazal. :k:

[kaleemhk]

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very nice .......

[Amal]

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@Koyal

***tera naam hi aaya tha lab par ke saari khalqat cheekh utthi *** ***tera haath pakar kar sarkoN par terey saath chaley to kya ho ga! ***

Something I am really proud of writing. Isn’t it really good guys? Sorry, apney mooN miaN mitthu … but frankly speaking, I love this sheir for many technical reasons.

**HeArT HaCKeR,/B] nice to know that you remember it. I thought people read and just forget. Thanx for proving me wrong

And Koyal saheba, shukran, jazeelan kabeeran for re-posting it

[Berhi_Bee]

Re: par phir bhi meri aaNkhoN meiN tera khaab paley to kya ho ga!

humeshah kik terha zeberdesttt :)
thx 4 sharing

[Koyal]

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@Berhi_Bee

humeshah kik terha zeberdesttt :) thx 4 sharing

:)

[Koyal]

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@Muslim girl

simply beautiful…:k:

thanks

[Koyal]

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@HeArT HaCKeR

thumbs up again for Amal.why dint you post the full ghazal? anywayz, thx for sharing :).

hmmmmm :)

[Koyal]

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@Shab-e-Hijar

qyamat hogi nice shair :-)

amal nay ya ap nay pahly post kya huwa ye ...rite???

g kia huwa hia :) ,,per qayamat keon ho ghi shab..:)

[Koyal]

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@Daanie

buhut khoobsurat

[Koyal]

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@Amal

Something I am really proud of writing. Isn’t it really good guys? Sorry, apney mooN miaN mitthu … but frankly speaking, I love this sheir for many technical reasons.

HeArT HaCKeR,/B] nice to know that you remember it. I thought people read and just forget. Thanx for proving me wrong
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**And Koyal saheba, shukran, jazeelan kabeeran for re-posting it

hmmm itni jaqeel urdu :halo: ..samjay gha kon

[reet]

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thnx Koyal for sharing this beautiful piece by Amal.......!

[Bholay_Bisray]

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Its Beautifullllll **:) so simple and so expresive!
Thanks **Amal **for writting such nice things and **Koyal, jinhain koi loog **Nikami **kah rahay hain , aap ki bhi shukriya for posting it again(though i missed it before) :)

[Koyal]

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@Bholay Bisray

Its **Beautifullllll ** so simple and so expresive!
Thanks **Amal **for writting such nice things and Koyal, jinhain koi loog **Nikami **kah rahay hain , aap ki bhi shukriya for posting it again(though i missed it before)

than why again it’s ur first time na and U know am not Nikami am Koyal:cu2: