**Laaya hei ab k bahaar jo usey dhoondti hey meri nazaR
***jo meri kitaaboN meiN jaga jaga taazey gulab chupa gaya ***
meiN thehar thehar ke har qadam pe dekhti hooN baar-ha
*koi aasmaan sey tooR kaR meRi rahoN meiN taRey bicha gaya *
khaab baN kaR mila bhi to meRi neend ka rakkha khayal yuN
*k khamshi ki zubaaN meiN mujhey dil ki bateiN bataa gaya *
meRey zehaN k qufal khol kar wo roshni ke saath saath
*meRey dil ki daR-o-deiwaaR paR apni tasveereiN sajaa gaya *
meiN hawaa ke dosh pe us ke sang urrti hooN kehkashaoN meiN
jo ik band gali sey nikaal kaR mujhey zindagi sey milaa gaya
**
meiN dil ko apney maaR kar khush thi ke qissa khatm huwa
par khaahishoN ke mazaaR pe koi phir sey deeye jalaa gaya **
Re: par khaahishoN ke mazaar pe koi phiR sey deeye jalaa gaya
meiN dil ko apney maaR kar khush thi ke qissa khatm huwa
par khaahishoN ke mazaaR pe koi phir sey deeye jalaa gaya
**waise to pore ghazal khoobsorat hai per this sher is outstanding .. :k: .. thanx for sharing .. **
system
March 6, 2005, 9:01am
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Am so in love with this ghazal... lovely :-)
I remember Koyal posted this once and few people visualised it as well... :-)
Re: par khaahishoN ke mazaar pe koi phiR sey deeye jalaa gaya
luv this ghazal.
thanks for sharin NJ
reet
March 6, 2005, 10:43am
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Re: par khaahishoN ke mazaar pe koi phiR sey deeye jalaa gaya
meiN dil ko apney maaR kar khush thi ke qissa khatm huwa
par khaahishoN ke mazaaR pe koi phir sey deeye jalaa gaya
bahot khoob......
Daagh
March 6, 2005, 12:32pm
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bahot khoob NJ jee :)
Re: par khaahishoN ke mazaar pe koi phiR sey deeye jalaa gaya
NikamiJano:
**Laaya hei ab k bahaar jo usey dhoondti hey meri nazaR
***jo meri kitaaboN meiN jaga jaga taazey gulab chupa gaya ***
meiN thehar thehar ke har qadam pe dekhti hooN baar-ha
*koi aasmaan sey tooR kaR meRi rahoN meiN taRey bicha gaya *
khaab baN kaR mila bhi to meRi neend ka rakkha khayal yuN
*k khamshi ki zubaaN meiN mujhey dil ki bateiN bataa gaya *
meRey zehaN k qufal khol kar wo roshni ke saath saath
*meRey dil ki daR-o-deiwaaR paR apni tasveereiN sajaa gaya *
meiN hawaa ke dosh pe us ke sang urrti hooN kehkashaoN meiN
jo ik band gali sey nikaal kaR mujhey zindagi sey milaa gaya
**
meiN dil ko apney maaR kar khush thi ke qissa khatm huwa
par khaahishoN ke mazaaR pe koi phir sey deeye jalaa gaya **
beautifull ghazal janooooo gi :k:
ps
Amal
March 6, 2005, 7:42pm
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Bohat khoob NikamiJi :k:
Aryaan
March 7, 2005, 3:12am
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very nice ** NikamiJano**…:k:
Re: par khaahishoN ke mazaar pe koi phiR sey deeye jalaa gaya
meiN dil ko apney maaR kar khush thi ke qissa khatm huwa
par khaahishoN ke mazaaR pe koi phir sey deeye jalaa gaya
Very Nive Nikami…
Tnx
Re: par khaahishoN ke mazaar pe koi phiR sey deeye jalaa gaya
Buhat khoob Nikami ji:-)
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buhat khoob NJ:flower1:
Re: par khaahishoN ke mazaar pe koi phiR sey deeye jalaa gaya
meiN dil ko apney maaR kar khush thi ke qissa khatm huwa
par khaahishoN ke mazaaR pe koi phir sey deeye jalaa gaya
**waise to pore ghazal khoobsorat hai per this sher is outstanding .. :k: .. thanx for sharing .. **
Thanks gkk:)
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Rameesha:
buhat khoob NJ:flower1:
shukria Ramesh kesi hain ap aur kahaN hoti
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GuL-e-Tasbeeh:
Buhat khoob Nikami ji:-)
thanks Gul-e-tea
also thanks** Golden…Aryan…Hh…reet…Daagh sahib…kn**
Re: par khaahishoN ke mazaar pe koi phiR sey deeye jalaa gaya
Amal:
Bohat khoob NikamiJi :k:
koi shaak hai Aymal Nikami ki khoobi maiN
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bohat khoob
Koyal
March 20, 2005, 12:14pm
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:k: