pani mein pather!

Muslim_girl_1 · November 25, 2006, 12:24am

Pani mein pathar na pheko
Isay koi aur bhi peeta hai
Mayoos rehkar zindagi na guzaro
Tumhein dekhkar koi aur bhi jeeta hai:)

Muslim_girl_1 · November 25, 2006, 12:28am

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~~hum na hon gy to kon manaye ga tumhein
yeah buri baat hai her baat pe rotha na karo~~

Muslim_girl_1 · November 25, 2006, 12:29am

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sorry guys!
Wrong section!
Mods plz move it to Intakhaab!!
Thx!
Sorry again!!!!

Krypton · November 25, 2006, 2:13am

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nice

insan · November 25, 2006, 2:33am

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Very cheering poetry , finally saw first poet who cheer people by her poetry nice :) keep it up

AQ · November 25, 2006, 2:42am

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agar aisaa hai tau hammaiN pataa honaa chaahiye kaY woh kaun hai jo chup chup kaY hammaiN dekh kar jeeta hai

Uncle_Stalker · November 25, 2006, 2:53am

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if this thread isn’t moved to proper forum within 10 minutes
I would officially declare it open for flooding

AQ · November 25, 2006, 3:07am

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issi baat par aik sher ho jaaYe

Khanoo9 · November 25, 2006, 3:12am

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nice shair....

Muslim_girl_1 · November 26, 2006, 12:26am

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Y mods didnt move this thread??????????????

_ahn · November 26, 2006, 12:38am

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acha challoo akheri mertaba mana loo

Muslim_girl_1 · November 26, 2006, 12:55am

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her baar akhri baaar hi hoti hai!