Pani ke mala ka hasil

na khe sakey wohh baat, so unkahee he saheeffice
khood janey tow hey, per wohh mun na rahee
keb theekh kiya jo khood ghayel hovey,
aur preet ko gafil kiya?
yey na mumkin se baat tow nahee…
ankh kee nindiya jatee chahey,
seb theekh kiya jo kho gayey,
aur apney nafs ko khalee zahir kiya!
meet ke arzoo, hans dey jehan jis per,
rooh boleye, kushkh-ter ho gaee hey tu,
chahey nem teiree ankhein preet sein hoon
paish hey ger medhem see jalan,
yey bipta her soo iss key seeney mey jo ho
Ya Ilahee, derya dilee sey jo acha ho, so ho
seb sheb ka undheir sevira ankhoon mey jo ho
dukh kee mala perona, deed (eyes) ka fun he sahee
kabhee khoon-garem, kabhee rooh-serd –
kamoshee sey girtey,
bey-asr ansoon yey abshaar,
koe noubahar-e-khoodee adhem ho
(rebirth of a new soul)

Dushwari

Re: Pani ke mala ka hasil

lobly:p

Re: Pani ke mala ka hasil

Dushwari sis.
'rooh boleye, kushkh-ter ho gaee hey tu,
chahey nem teiree ankhein preet sein hoon
paish hey ger medhem see jalan,
yey bipta her soo iss key seeney mey jo ho
Ya Ilahee, derya dilee sey jo acha ho, so ho'

affective spikes and valleys in your poems are awesome. you do not feel personally so intensely, eh? it is not good for health my dear. thanks for sharing.
cheers!